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Registration Date: 10-08-2006
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Please check out my new track 'project x rebeated' and post your comments here!!!
erasted every beat in the damn thing and replaced it, has a much cleaner sound... but who am i to tell you..have a listen you have been a great help.
big up to every on of u.
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22-08-2007 05:33 |
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DRS
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Registration Date: 12-06-2007
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like the smooth reese intro. tune very minimal but rolls well, really loving the melody that the high reese plays at around 1.44. ooh clashing notes at 1.59 and again later. dont know if it the wrong note in the scale or the harmonics of the note are out of scale but i would have a look at it cos its sounds a bit wrong. besides that i would add a bit more to the finished track in ways of effects and maybe another synth part, also some drumm fills wouldnt go a miss. all in all though big tune, its good to hear a tune that doesnt make your ears bleed on the website. keep em coming
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22-08-2007 14:31 |
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Halph-Price
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to be honest i got bored with the track fast. don't afraid to add new things, or remove other and replace them with other instrumentation. fucking up samples beyond recognition is another useful tool. it helps add some organic elements. samples are rela world sounds, synths are digital sounds, not real. people like real world sounds more, generally. see if you can include them int here. also there's an art of contrast, silence. you have noise all the time, drums or something going all the tiem. try to bring it back to have just one element, or even for a half a bar nothing, it add's a lot more dynamic to your tracks. it makes the louds louder. you have 3 elements going at 3:00 if you stripped it to 1 and then added in them in by layer, people could hear more of what's going on. by having 2 elements going at one time, like 2 synths, if they sound simular, the mind will hear them as one instrument playing, one pattern, not 2 overlapping, which can be helpful sometimes. the mind is funny once it tunes into one of the patterns, and then you add a second it doens't sound like one sound, the listeners actually hears the orgiinal sound and the second sound. it makes a huge difference. it's a clever trick if done properly. you hear it done in songs ALL the time and don't even notice it. it's usually refered to as the break down, because it breaks down the elements of the track. just the drums or just the bass, or just the vocals or synths. this is usually before the drop, the thinned out track makes the chorus, or drop, seem bigger, which is suppose to be a full sonic assault. with everything going, drums full throttle, bass just rolling, synths 2 or 3 at a time. just a riot.
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22-08-2007 21:30 |
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Acoustiks
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Registration Date: 28-06-2007
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Coo, coo. It is kind of boring imo. The reese is cool, and I like the melody also. It gives me this rock feel, which I like. But I think the breaks where a little to light, try layering multiple breaks together. Still really cool.
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23-08-2007 21:00 |
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Tomos
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Pretty good overall. The beats are ok but have too much reverb on them. It makes them sound quite distant, like they were recorded in a hall or something.
Bassline melody pretty good. I'd give it sound more effects tho, definiately more distortion and grittyness. It's pretty standard as it is. It needs to make you go, "Wow!". At the moment, it just makes me go, "OK, not bad".
I'm not overly keen on the high-pitched synth. It just seems a bit cheesy and out of place. Strings may sound better, imo.
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26-08-2007 17:35 |
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Uberchile
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Registration Date: 14-05-2007
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cool intro synth i like, niice lead in with the drums its all coming to geter at the moment, the beep is a bit annoying. nice second bass line,
break has formed nicely now it needs a push, this song is working well at the moment and the synth all fits with the bass line.
a few of the notes dont fit quite right i would re analyse and pitch shifts or push the bass up a few cents.
the keyboard track index shift on the synth works really well and gives a good charachteristic in this tune, im liking this but its not party quality yet, push the whole thing through and EQ and bass it up theres a lagre gap that needs to be filled (the bass).
the song is also very quiet, push the decibels 
opverall a very individual and exiting track, its pretty grooving and i enjoyed listening, keep up the good beats and bass it up!.
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26-08-2007 23:07 |
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