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demolitionkid
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Please check out my new track 'set it off(prez retitled)' and post your comments here!!!
ok guys this is the second pass at about 12 hours of arranging and mixing.the song has taken a much different form and i hope its a better one.yes i still havent done the drums yet because i feel that its better for arranging if you wait till the end to "pimp out" the track. well guys and gals i hope you enjoy
demolitionkid
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21-08-2007 23:18 |
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demolitionkid
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hmmm nobody loves me
ohh well i guess you guys dont like it back to the drawing board
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24-08-2007 07:19 |
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Seven Gun
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i love ya, ya big fag.
hehe, just jokes.
yeah man, lovely sample use and composition.
gotta say tho, i prefer the rawness of the first version.
intro drags on a bit on this one.
also, the mix is a touch muddy (hate that shit), but the ideas are sound and i can deffo hear a big
track evolving from this.
the filtered break is build up is nice, but i would keep the frequency higher because on the last part, the bass dump is too dumpy if ya catch ma drift?
but yeah, like ya say, the arrangement is all there n cool, just needs the mixdown now.
large upz DK
peace 7G
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Seven Gun: 24-08-2007 17:19.
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24-08-2007 17:19 |
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Lightningflash
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love the start but the drums are crap
put some good drums over that and itll be great.
you have some nice sounds going on there
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25-08-2007 17:03 |
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Kia
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Not at all bad, but to be fair I'm here for the google ad producer.
yeah, agreed, good sound going man
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26-08-2007 06:58 |
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Tomos
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Really cool pads. I love the melodies in the intro, excellent. Yeah, the beats need a bit of work but you know that already.
Cool bassline half way through but the sound is too muddy. It dirtys the whole sound. Tone it down a bit and it'll be really good.
Not much else to say really. A bit of work needed still but defo a cool track, especially the pads and bassline.
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26-08-2007 17:20 |
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Uberchile
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the industrial creates a battle field like environment. sounds good, nice pad work, the quality of the drum samples sounds poor if ur using imported wav files go on windows sound recorder and change the PCM setting to highr samples per second.
the song breaks nicely into a swift yet light DnB track the vocals add a nice feeling especially with delay, more sub bass would work well in this track.
overall this track works well and has some neat and individual ideas i quite like the first break and the drop after the main section. then the bass comes out which gets good.
its all works after that and fits like a glove
the two sections complement a nice build and fill all style consideration gaps it would appeal to many listeners, the bass is a little bit to distrorted and keeps the same phaser/flange settin is theis was pushed eg frequency or split variation it would complement nicely to the sub bass.
the synth riff is a good continuous pattern which works in both sections acting as a bride this iss a good effect.
well done nice track
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26-08-2007 22:52 |
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