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sKeeZ
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Please check out my new track 'Aurora Borealis' and post your comments here!!!
My first track @ this forum, made at FL Studio 7, any feedback appreciated. I'm willing to collab with peoples who likes similar kinds of music
peace, skeez
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ICQ: 385-128-925
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20-08-2007 14:07 |
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Tomos 
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Wow, loads of reverb on the beats, especially the kick - you need to tone it down a bit!! It's really overpowering. The patterns are really good tho, the sounds are good too - but like I said, tone down the reverb.
Not much of a tune or melody to this - just constant thundering beats. I like your style!! I'd describe it as Soundtrack-to-the-apocalypse-core!
I think you could do with some more scary, evil FX in there. The beats are not quite enough to carry the track alone, you need to give the listener a little bit more interest.
Lots of promise here, a new style. Really cool stuff. Keep at it.
Welcome to the site by the way, fellow FLS7 user. 
If you fancy a collab give us a shout!
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Tomos: 20-08-2007 20:56.
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20-08-2007 20:55 |
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sKeeZ
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It was idea, I have pretty bad state of mind now I want just look @ the sky and see this purple-orange clouds. I want to wait for the storm and fall asleep and never wake up again :x
thx for review m8, check myspace page btw. [;
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20-08-2007 21:09 |
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BattleDrone
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Pretty depressive thoughts you are having there man....
HEre's some feedback on your track.
The drums should sound more like a drummer, not like a machine (I don't mean a drummachine, but some big loud machine in a factory). There is no room for anything else really. This way it gets boring after 1 minute. 
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20-08-2007 23:45 |
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DRS
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wow. what was that? it is barely music. you need to learn about melody, suspence, build up and most importantly space. this track is just full on all the time, to many kick drums going off, take some out. with music it is not always about the notes and hits you do play but the ones that you dont. there is nothing for the listener to listen to but harsh abrasive drum loops that are over the top. you should rework the drum loop to give it a better rythm and add some synths maybe just maybe a bit off bass. i know it is a crazy idea but it is called drum AND bass for a reason.
got to go now my ears are bleeding!!!
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21-08-2007 15:24 |
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sKeeZ
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thx 4 feedbacks guys, i don't make this tune for melody or smth else, it's just my state of mind ;-). Generally I make breakcore/mashup song. It was only experiment [;
Thx for all constructive reviews I'm sure they help me to make a better tunes in future :-)
cheers
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22-08-2007 15:12 |
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Lightningflash
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nice
I can hear Cliff Richard's harmonies going well in here
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25-08-2007 17:10 |
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Surya
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Originally posted by DRS
wow. what was that? it is barely music. you need to learn about melody, suspence, build up and most importantly space. this track is just full on all the time, to many kick drums going off, take some out. with music it is not always about the notes and hits you do play but the ones that you dont. there is nothing for the listener to listen to but harsh abrasive drum loops that are over the top. you should rework the drum loop to give it a better rythm and add some synths maybe just maybe a bit off bass. i know it is a crazy idea but it is called drum AND bass for a reason.
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Ever heard of Current Value? If you know his shit, you know where this track came from. Not a bad imitation at all, just too bad the snare is 2-step
So, no he doesn't have to learn about melody and shit, this is just a different genre. One that's all about thundering drums with booming kicks and smashing snares and nothing more.
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26-08-2007 14:04 |
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Uberchile
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nice intro sounds alot like something noisia would pull out. good choice of fx in that as well and i like the delays.
synths are all cool nice build up on the intro bringing in gentler sounds. resembles heavy metal a little bit.
nice vox/inaudible vocals
the hardcore drumming is good, very physical track would be great to rave to.
i think this track would have a very slim band of appeal eg only real fans of harcore drumming would listen next time open up to let all styles mix and match. apart from that its a very original track ad i think its great.
nice individual style keep it up, verry underground 
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