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goonybag 
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Registration Date: 12-11-2006
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Please check out my new track 'Abomination' and post your comments here!!!
some bombs i been workin on, hope you like. still undecided on if i should put some vox on the intro or not yet,after the feedback .be crew. big up!
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18-08-2007 11:16 |
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DRS
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nice chilled intro, drums lack weight and presence.also they are too simple, some more percusion, fills subtle kick rolls? something to liven them up a bit. i think vox would fit pretty well. dont really like the drop i suppose it flows quite well, shit that bass at 2.30 is wicked love that sound, if this were my track i would make that the main bass line, kind of hazard/baron like. all in all the elements fit together well and does have good potential.
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18-08-2007 13:28 |
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Surya
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Not bad, but is missing some of them wickid punchy ghosts like Limewax uses a lot 
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18-08-2007 14:56 |
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BattleDrone
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The instruments sound too much "preset", bass is not full enough, needs more sub. Buildup is a bit messy. Some good elements there. With a bit of work this could be really good.
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19-08-2007 13:06 |
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Bulls-I
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Like the psychedelic intro melody, bass drop is good at 0:42, drums are bit empty I think, bass sound at 1:07 improves that but I would let it in longer,fast hi-hats at 1:30 sound too computer-like I think.
Vocal 'do it' is very nice, nice drop too although I would bring more sounds in at once at the drop around 2:00 so you create bigger DROP effect, EQ-ing is good, bit more cymbals, rides and hi-hats would improve it also I think!
Nice Job, really like that style!
grtz Bulls-I
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19-08-2007 19:36 |
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tryptech
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Like the synthswork really
dont like the hat so much cuz its to standard
drums could be more in front
but the programming is nice though
Like the basspart
nice song your rating is so low dont get it
i like it
8 outtah 10
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19-08-2007 22:46 |
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goonybag
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thanks peoples for your time, looks like I better turn those drums up, I was being a little conservative there i must admit, but everyone seems to think they are too low, after another listen, I do agree.
As for the hats, yeh they are just basic 16ths with a little velocity programming. So I will spend a little more time trying to change them up a bit with different samples, and by breaking up the pattern in places.
Cheers for checkin it, I have taken all advice on board, and will definitely be making some changes.
big up to all the massive 
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20-08-2007 04:14 |
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sKeeZ
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Good tune overall, but those hihats don't match in my opinion. Good idea I think you have been inspirated by old Bad Company Tracks (Shot down on safari / inside the machine ). keep working mate and don't give up !
cheers, skeez
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20-08-2007 10:08 |
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Tomos
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Great start! Love those melodies and the sound is coming out really well. Opening beats are solid. Changes at 1.29 are excellent too!
The change over at around 1.50 sounds like old Ed Rush stuff - very good. Good mixtures of different textures and flavours. Love it! I actually disagree with the others on the beats - I think they're already loud enough. If you turned them up any further they'd probably start overpowering the basslines.
The very last concluding melody is very standard and a bit boring to be honest. Sounds like you didn't give it much thought.
But apart from that, this is a great tune!!
I'd love to do a collab on a track with you if you're up for it? What software do you use?
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20-08-2007 20:26 |
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xevex
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fellas- really like this one for some of its nice dirty synths. intro part sounds almost like guitar w/fx, cool cool. res pads slight cheese, ascent to better intro part is thereby rendered cheese as well. like the classic dnb style bassline a lot and the bass sounds are sr8 as could be. drums may be a slight issue, for the hi hat in the eighth note part, try adjusting the levels or velocities to different settings for the different hits to make them sound more human, also for the sixteenth hi hats turn down the "off beat" hits a little more (advice given is purely opinionated crap). beats are good though more rolls n fills would be nice and slight level drop on the chika chika rolls or shorter decay time on those in between snares already in place might help. i really love the synths in this one yeah mon
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21-08-2007 04:35 |
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