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Please check out my new track 'project x' and post your comments here!!!
something me and a friend started, but i had to finish it alone...started messing around with some bass and i got to this... could use some pointers tho..check it out, hope you can bob ya head to it.
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18-08-2007 04:21 |
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Tomos
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Yeah, this one has got me head bobbing. The melodies are really interesting in a weird kind of way. They don't seem to gel very well - but still somehow sound good!
The opening bassline at 0.50 really need to be louder. It's being swamped by other sounds - especially the snare which is way too loud. I really don't like that snare at all - it needs to be tighter, harder and quieter.
The extra hi hats come in quiet loud, I'd turn them down a bit.
I really don't think the opening melodies fit in with the rest of the track. When I first heard them I was expecting a chilled, funky track.
With a bit of work this could be a really decent tune.
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18-08-2007 09:49 |
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DRS
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drums are a bit week, try compressing them then resampling them and layer them up with a weightier snare and kick to sit behind them,a track like this needs a solid back beat to keep it rolling, decent rythem though. the melody is a pretty weird but i quite like it, reminds me of a couple of frictions older tracks. the break down is a bit basic it works but is not very professional sounding, i t may work better with properly compressed and eqed drums.
good track rework it and stick back up here
peace
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18-08-2007 13:37 |
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goonybag
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the drums sound too "roomy" for me, maybe back off on the reverb or try some samples that are punchy and try, then add small ammounts of reverb to glue them together. the snare is way too loud. The bass type reece you got going has potential, sounds good but at the moment is being swamped by the snare, i cant feel it in my gut. you have done a fair bit of drum editing which is good, but my main advice would be to redo the drum sounds,the sequencing is ok, but the sounds dont seem to fit. keep at it 
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19-08-2007 03:51 |
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!F!eo
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19-08-2007 10:52 |
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BattleDrone
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Sounds a bit messy, remove reverb from snare. Clean up the structure. The whole drums sound like they got a bunch of reverb on them.
The drop is way to busy. Overall too many synths and unclear melodies/chords going on. Sometimes it even sounds way off.
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