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rockx
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Please check out my new track 'Shredder - Ripyourheartout Preview' and post your comments here!!!
Hey, so ive put away the previous one i was working on and started a new one. Its far from finished but just trying to find out im on the right track. This is it. Spit your comments.
Cheers
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16-08-2007 15:59 |
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Tomos 
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Errr ... what?? This is basically metal with beats. I don't think it's dnb!
Don't get me wrong - I love that Pentera-like opening riff. But it doesn't gel with the other stuff - it's way out of sync and out of tune. The beats sound really messy.
The whole thing really, really needs tightening up. It's all over the place. Take some of the distortion off the beats, that'd be a good start.
This could turn into a decent NIN-style, industrial metal track - which I'm really into - but it wouldn't be dnb. Check out Ministry and Pitchshifter if you're looking for bands with a similar style.
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16-08-2007 19:15 |
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BattleDrone
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Good idea, but it needs a looooot of work.
The guitar sample has some high crap going on which sounds like it was sampled from tape.
The breaks are done quite sloppy though and it all is too slow. The rave synth buildup sounds clownsteppish and doesn't sound "rip your heart out" at all.
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17-08-2007 13:02 |
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goonybag
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needs a shitload of work on the mix. the guitars are massive, but not contained, as is the beat. your definitely heading down the industrial road here, does not sound like drum n bass at all. keep at it though.
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18-08-2007 01:11 |
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DRS
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wow agresive guitar at first. to distorted and doest fit together. just a mess really and wrong tempo. not what i would call dnb.
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22-08-2007 14:42 |
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Lightningflash
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i like it
keep it going
it sounds like it could be something diferant
dont like your chois of notes on the synth
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25-08-2007 19:46 |
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Uberchile
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i wouldnt say the guitar fits and it gos on for too long at the beginning, niice 64th loop on reason 
i wouldnt call this a song as such and it really dosnt sound like drum and bass remember its the drump loops u want to set the tempo to not the riffs, work around the drums and use things that fit with them if u want the riff then cut to half tempo and start with a deep beat intro eg 'pendulum slam'
the song is short and regardless of the preview status it dosnt hook me.
the brass thing made me want to stop the track but it got into it ok, variate the pitch of the guitar loop to use different chords too.
this song needs work before it can get of the ground, u need to cover more space, pan the two main loops and fit in some synths or pads to keep an edge otherwise it sounds like useless fuzz.
overall not too good but keep trying, make the preveiw longer too so people can get an insight to the rest of the song.
keep working
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26-08-2007 22:46 |
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