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tryptech 
Tryptech
Registration Date: 16-08-2006
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Please check out my new track 'China' and post your comments here!!!
Some electronic experimental shizzle from eh
I like the bass
samples from Sevenguns breaks plus
munki c etc
Thanks
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14-08-2007 21:30 |
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Halph-Price
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nice change ups and rhythem going. the added pads at 2:10 could have came in 4 bars earlier or sooner even. i like the precussions that happen after.
at 2:50 you could have dropped to a much harder drums or sound even. after going that long with the same sound change up!
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14-08-2007 23:30 |
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DRS
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nice chilled vibe. drops nicely. the second drop isnt as good. i feel it is too repetative, sounds like the four bar loop should be part of an eight bar loop. the sound is good but it think could be used to better effect as it takes all the energy out of the track. some more percusion wouldnt go a miss, changing up the drums more. also adding a heavier bass to the mix.
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15-08-2007 01:02 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
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not wild about the vocal being pitched like that, funny though. Sounds a bit empty.
When the bass plays solo it is too loud.
Not bad for an experiment, but it needs more to be a good track.
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15-08-2007 20:05 |
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Tomos
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Weird but interesting! I can tell a lot of effort and tweaking went into this one. However, I think it's lacking some coherence. It sounds a bit all over the place and tends to change a little too often for a 3 1/2 minute track. Beats are solid but pretty standard. Ditto the basslines.
I'm not bowled over but not too disappointed either.
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15-08-2007 20:35 |
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goonybag
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definitely a change from what i normally hear on this site, and i dig it. has a cool feel to it, a little more"shuffly" than straght bangin. there is a synth blip thats seems way too loud on my headphones and could probably use a little eq, hurts the old ears a bit. the overall mix needs a little work as does the master,once thats nailed this track is a goer! clever little number, even a little cheeky but im into it. keep at it!
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19-08-2007 04:17 |
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Uberchile
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individual, nice scratchy snare, the bleeps create variation but can be a bit annoying, the bass is wickked when it rolls up but it only gets a short phrase in the section...mabye it could be pushed further.
the drums have little next to no variation which is a shame use the drums to fill rathwer than the bass all the time. the paddy bit could of built up better but it still works in the song. i like the lil melody tho it complemtnts everything nicely
tally ho jolly good track 
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26-08-2007 22:27 |
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tryptech
Tryptech
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30-08-2007 22:48 |
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Seven Gun
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Registration Date: 16-01-2007
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strange track.
it doesnt seem to have a coherant theme.
nice use of samples, just try to adjust the volume of each of them so
that they are smoother and less differential.
also try to layer one shots a bit better to mask the breaks you use.
i tend to try and only use breaks as fillers, so i chop them all up
and just use parts instead of all. this also has the added benefit of clearing up space in the sounds.
some pretty cool and original ideas floating about in this
so keep at it. maybe you could make two seperate tracks from it?
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