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dJSkiLlAx dJSkiLlAx is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Alien Force (Dark'n'Melody Version)' and post your comments here!!!
13-08-2007 22:46 Homepage of dJSkiLlAx
Seven Gun Seven Gun is a male
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give us some track info eh?

intro is well put together.
the sytrus sample is a bit obvious tho, but it fits ok.

beats need a little more punch and more mid.

i think you should use the bass sub more often

nice atmosphere, it works in the moody vibe.

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14-08-2007 20:59
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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Do something with the drums, do something with the instruments, there is too little track and too much soundscape. It sure is dark and not even in an agressive way (is a +) but there is not much of a melody, bassline, ...

With some work this could be a killer track.

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15-08-2007 20:02 Homepage of BattleDrone
Tomos Tomos is a male
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I think Seven Gun has hit the nail on the head. The beats are really good but they are too far back in the mix and you need to add some mid to them. The sub basses sound really fat and textured - you should use them more often and perhaps a little more creatively as well. They are a bit too 'standard' at the mo and a little uninspiring.

The overall vibe is really good and the track holds together really well. Nice one.

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15-08-2007 20:07 Homepage of Tomos
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