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rockx
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Registration Date: 15-06-2007
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Please check out my new track 'Shredder - Nameless track Preview' and post your comments here!!!
Hey, this is my first song. So still some work to do. All comments are appreciated.
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13-08-2007 18:15 |
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Tomos 
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Very choatic but some promise. The beats sound really good - sounds like Roni Size a bit. Nice fresh sound to them.
The synth playing in the background is pretty bad though, tbh. It seems to be doing its own thing without any regard for what the beats are doing. It's very far back in the mix as well and it's really not doing anything for the track.
You really need to work on your basslines. They don't have to be complicated - but they need to gel with the beats and make your head bob.
The best thing to do when you're starting out is to find some tracks you really like by other producers and try to emulate them. Find out how they get their sounds, note down their song structures, what equipment they use, etc, etc. Start incorporating their ideas into your own tracks but add some flavours of your own.
Btw, I only started doing DnB tunes about 5 or 6 months ago on FL Studio. I've got a long way to go but things are progressing nicely because I'm constantly pushing myself and trying to emulate the producers I'm really into, whilst at the same time trying some original ideas of my own.
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13-08-2007 19:13 |
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Binary Havoc
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Hey Rockz
Agree with Tomos comments on this one. Beats are the best part although I've heard (and used) that break plenty of times b4. Synths are totally too far removed from from the beat and need to chill out some. Are they quantized at all? You dont want to quantize the fuck out of everything but they really do need some to bring them more in line. Bass is lacking from the tune generally and because of this the whole thing feels a bit thin. Tomos advice to listen to producers you rate and try to emulate is a good starting point. But big respect for getting a tune up for some feedback, you'll only get better by keep writing more beats so get to it.
Nice one
Binary Havoc
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13-08-2007 20:37 |
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tryptech
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nice beats
indeed roni size like
very nice edits
but jeah the synthwork really isnt very well doneits to silent
but with every new song you make
it gets better believe me
so make short peaces
and show them to as many people as possible
but those beats promise succes
noce edits
keep up
7 for the beats
3 for the synths
gives a 5 outtah 10
for composition
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14-08-2007 21:51 |
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Halph-Price
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omg awsome track! well the drums the rest is kinda just there. in the background. you song sounds like me phone... i thought it was ringing at one point....
i dunno. keep it up and next time try to fit a bassline in.
good buildup at 2 
but then yuo repeat the melody from before. bad move, you need something totally different.
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14-08-2007 23:41 |
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DRS
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Registration Date: 12-06-2007
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hi hats too abrasive., when the drums drop the backing synth sounds out of time and is a very boring and un inspiried melody. the track, doesnt progress at all and no other elements are introduced. the drum loops are good but they are obvioulsy full sample loops. at 2.00 it sounds like, you have just stuck a bunch of these loops into a sequencer next to each other. they dont fit at all. i would probably scrap this track and put it down to experience. every one has got to start some where. keep on working and get another track up here. it is all about progressing. peace
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15-08-2007 01:25 |
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demolitionkid
where's demo?
Registration Date: 08-11-2006
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well not to bust your balls but it sounds like a bunch of loops,but you would be surprised at how much better it is than some peeps.the intro hat needs a hi pass filter to get rid of the guy stompin it up and down.the drums over all are of good quality but it kinda sounds like ripped beats maybe dunno.whats up with the random synth in the background it like doesnt go with any beat.dude regroup and head to the drawing board.
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16-08-2007 21:35 |
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Uberchile
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Registration Date: 14-05-2007
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your choir sounds like a strangulated rat, the drums are random and i would hold on the fills, it also soundsd like the ice cream van is outside but the speakers are being being mauled with large hammers.
dont change the snares around soo much and u must have about 300 kicks or something. u start a good break and then just mess it up. also there is no bass and the synth is reaslly getting on my nerves. nice santa claus effect with the sleigh bells but its kinda nowhere near christmas.
dont be downharted listen to some good tracks carefully and mimick them then add your own ideas.
overall in my opinion this track has died.
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26-08-2007 22:06 |
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