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Lightningflash 
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Registration Date: 25-07-2005
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Please check out my new track 'fastnois' and post your comments here!!!
all done on free stuff even samples from freesound good source of interesting samples.
secondhand computer. but enthusiasm to make up for it.
if I ever make any money then Ill spend some.
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12-08-2007 00:51 |
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Scurf
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Exelent Fx and Pads.... Like the bass play....
The snare could be more "fat" ....
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12-08-2007 03:40 |
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Tomos
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Hmm, not bad but there's too much emphasis on sound FX, imo. They are very loud and they're dominanting the sound, especially during the first 2 thirds of the track. They have their place but I'd much prefer you swtich them off after the minute mark and start creating some proper basslines and tunes, as you do towards the end. The slap-bass sound is excellent and I think you could do a lot more with it. It has a really funky sound.
The track really picks up towards the end because there's some great spacy, trance-like melodies. (However, I'm sure I've heard you use some of the samples before - especially the synthline which starts to play at 2.02.). Once I start really getting into the track, it ends. Like I said, you should incorporate more of these melodies into the beginning and middle sections of the track.
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12-08-2007 11:28 |
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BattleDrone
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What Tomos says sums it up quite nicely... totally agree.
What DAW did you use?
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12-08-2007 13:27 |
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tryptech
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Well done
i love it
your rating is much to lowdont understand it
nice pads although a little loud but jeah that can be solved in a minute
bass lovely
drums hard and kicking
keep on it
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12-08-2007 13:37 |
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Lightningflash
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thanks for D feeds
I hope you can hear that I have taken notice of previous advice BUT
I noticed some comments on the volume of the afex, well I was aware of that and I decided I wanted them to make an impact and I didn't want to loose the crispness in the mix.
dose any one agree or am I totally wrong? 
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12-08-2007 15:12 |
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djpanik
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panning ideas are cool
the F1 sound is too loud in the mix
beat is cool
u have to check your mix , some mistakes in it
apart from that tune is cool
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12-08-2007 19:56 |
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hardplnsdrftr
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I'll have to agree with those who say the FX are too loud. It complete ruins the track IMO. They are way too up front, they need to sit in the mix better I think.
This track has some really cool ideas, but the WAY too loud car swooshes & other fx pretty much ruin it and make it near unlistenable to me.
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13-08-2007 21:19 |
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Seven Gun
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not too bad. nice beats and nice atmosphere.
very abstract style you have.
not my cuppa tea to be honest.
needs a bassline imo.
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14-08-2007 21:12 |
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Halph-Price
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yyea freesound i have submited sounds on tehre, people seem to like it. who would ahv eknow the loud space engine sound is EXACTLY what some people are looking for. awsome preivew they have for the sounds too! you cans ee the sound first. SEE THE SOUND! how fucked up. you learn to understand that shit.
hehe, ok cool sounds. it's like the Autobaun of Kraftwerk with the cars. i shoudl do that, sweet.
and the dog barking? lol. find a doppler effect and make it sound liekt eh doggy is passing by. or just time streach the the dog to make it sound like it's being passed. hehe.
weird bassline choice. pluck bass, the 80's. the synth is cool with all that delay. but the drums are barly heard. at least yuo got the snare layerd ontop. you use the snare like a metranome. you never stop it or change it. even whent eh drums are going fucked. you should look into make them match better.
cool song.
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14-08-2007 23:34 |
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DRS
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Registration Date: 12-06-2007
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weird track, new ideas are not to be sneared at though. dont think you could really get into dancing to this though. could see it on a film sound track though.
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22-08-2007 14:39 |
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Uberchile
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Registration Date: 14-05-2007
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cool lil intro there, whats with the dogs?
break comes nicely and yes this nois is fast 
mabye the racing sounds could be not so loud but used as backs more than evry thing.
the bass is simple but effective but played style basses can only go so far, the one main problem i can find is a lcak of structure and alot of machine gun style drill n bass examples, it sounds more and more random as the song progresses and the synth only breaks the surface of the song whichj is a shame it works where it is i guess tho
over all cleareer phrases and less random hammer fills but its quite a cool lil song
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26-08-2007 22:35 |
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