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DRS 
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Please check out my new track 'Could This Be The Love' and post your comments here!!!
this is a new idea i have thrown together. a lot more work to be done but, lookin for a bit of feedback on the style and vibe of the track, let me know what you lot think.
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07-08-2007 15:10 |
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Shinyuri
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that first stab thing is a little too loud imo - was hurting my ears a little before the drums came in a bit. maybe compressed a bit too much? like the singing in it, real funky like.
hooooly fuk! where did that come from! luv that bassline!!!1 love that fukin sound, shiiiit. tune got a rewind in the player!!! i would be ravin so hard to this if i heard it in a rave that i would acidentally headbutt everyone around me and lose my bottle of water all the while with a massive gurn spanning the whole of my face. fuk me.
however the tune is really let down by the drums being pushed too much in the background by the overpowering bass. they need to be much clearer and not affected by the bass. re eq it, re master it and then stick it back here quick sharp! also u best be givin me a copy of this after u done that!
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07-08-2007 19:18 |
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Shinyuri
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also is that intro stab a little over on the right? would b better in the middle
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07-08-2007 19:38 |
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DRS
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yeah you are right, the mix is shite but i havent, tweaked it at all yet. i stuck it together and forgot about it for a little while. thought i would throw it up how it is and if i got positive feedback i would reproduce. lookin good so far!
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07-08-2007 20:06 |
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Tomos
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I've gotta agree with the Shin Master General on this one - those basslines with the vocals on the main drop are pure fuckin awesome!! Sooo, soo funky and catchy and yet so simple too. Wow.
Yeah, the beats are good but way too far in the background. The sound really lets them down, plus you're a bit heavy on the crashes. If only you could get some equally good beats to match those vocals and basslines you'd have an absolutely killer tune!!
Keep at it bro, this preview has got massive promise!!
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07-08-2007 23:20 |
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BattleDrone
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Damn, this track has potential, but it's not coming out yet.
EQing is a problem and reverb too. The main bass is everywhere, the vocals suffer from it.
The guitar in the intro is crackling because it is clipping badly.
Work on that drumroll in the intro, it's not rolling well enough. The bass at 1:30 is a disaster, you shouldn't have added that one, it changes pitch when played, so it is always off with the rest.
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08-08-2007 00:57 |
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Scurf
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Exelent preview.... Very nice sound and very groove tune ..... Finish it!!!
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11-08-2007 18:41 |
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Lightningflash
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not that excited with the drums
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11-08-2007 19:18 |
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Seven Gun
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the ideas are very good.
dodgy 90's soundin rnb vocal with big wobbles.
but i think the eq side of things needs a lot of work.
with correct eqing this would be a releasable track.
i'm not a fan of the crash symbol on the snare tho.
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14-08-2007 20:44 |
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Halph-Price
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guitar skanks. after the bass comes in yuo can totaly change the drums to something compeltly different and better. something punchier.
the vocals might be a bit to loud. in regard to how distant the drums sound. the bass isn't exactly clear either.
maybe layer a kick with no bottem to give that one a bit more punch and clarity.
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14-08-2007 23:38 |
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