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Please check out my new track 'bowling for guns' and post your comments here!!!
started this one using some samples i found on the net regarding bowling for columbine, some distorded basses...it's not quite finished yet, but i really could use some pointers. have a listen and offcourse feed back is appreciated.
big up.
This track has been deleted because a new version is available
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04-08-2007 04:24 |
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Seven Gun
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thats pretty good mate.
i like the intro.
the only downsides are that there isnt enough varition on the bassline.
also the beat sounds a bit too
mampi swift's "the one".
cool tack all in all.
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04-08-2007 05:08 |
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thx for the review man, and about the beats, wouldnt know, never heard of that tune..i'm going to bed now, i'll fix these things tomorrow cheers.
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04-08-2007 05:14 |
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goonybag
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vox samples sound cool. kinda aphex twin sounding. would make a cool intro for sure. Half time beat is cool, drop is not prominant enough but is ok. there is a little stiffness in the beat, which is ok for an intro considering the whole theme (military type feel) if the beats could roll more with the drop i feel this would help the track a lot.
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04-08-2007 09:47 |
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Tomos
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Yeah, nice tune lead, interesting style. Sounds like you've put a lot of time into this one. It's very well constructed, especially the first half of the track. During the last third I found myself losing some interest a little. Perhaps you should inject sound new vibes and sounds towards the latter stages of the track. Also, I think you'd benefit from having a vocal hook in there, or something similar. At the moment, all the emphasis and hooks come from the basslines. It'd be nice if you could have a few other elements interacting with the basslines to give the listeners a few hooks to bop their heads to.
The beats, imo, are excellent. You've got a really great sound and you mash them up really well during the fills and breakdowns. I wouldn't change them at all.
Well done lead, great tune mate.
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04-08-2007 10:37 |
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Shinyuri
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u havent heard of mampi swifts the one!?!?!?!?!?!? fukin ell mate - one of the best tunes at the time - n still can get a crowd goin mental when dropped right.
anyways gettin back to the point, the tunes cool - got some nice ideas going on - the drums arnt too bad imo but i rekon u could benefit from fading in the rolls sometimes, make some nice change ups. i like the synth ur using on this one - what u make it on?
yeh the samples ur using at the start - sounds like its got a bit too much hiss on the high end - eq them out a bit. tho they do go well with the track.
anyways liking this track - its got loads of energy.
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