drumnbass.be forum

drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » dJSkiLlAx - LPS
Go to the bottom of this page dJSkiLlAx - LPS
Author
Post
dJSkiLlAx dJSkiLlAx is a male
skillax


Registration Date: 19-01-2007
Posts: 33

Helpfulness rating: 
1 Vote(s) - Average Rating: 1.00

Please check out my new track 'dJSkiLlAx - LPS' and post your comments here!!!

This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by dJSkiLlAx: 30-07-2007 13:51.
30-07-2007 13:38 Homepage of dJSkiLlAx
Wood. Wood. is a male
Producer


images/avatars/avatar-2469.jpg

Registration Date: 29-07-2007
Posts: 70
It doesn't grab my attention as much as a good track should.
I like the main idea behind the breaks though, so there's potential.

There's not much to say about the rest, because there is not that big of a 'rest'?Throughout the track I see you are focussing on breaks all the time, breaking them down and starting them over again?? What happened to the other elements? It's also too repetitive imo, except for the beginning. Needs some structure and other extra sounds imo.

This post has been edited 2 time(s), it was last edited by Wood.: 30-07-2007 16:30.
30-07-2007 15:13 Homepage of Wood.
Tomos Tomos is a male
Infidel


images/avatars/avatar-2998.jpg

Registration Date: 15-04-2007
Posts: 2,276

Helpfulness rating: 
18 Vote(s) - Average Rating: 9.28

Reminds me a bit of the earlier MetalHeadz stuff, particularly Photek. Not really my kinda thing. It's a good idea but sounds quite dry. This track would definitely benefit from some heavier, bassier sounds. It's all a bit too mid-range at the mo. For this track to really work I think you need more variations and more dynamics in terms of beat changes, snare and kick sounds, SFX, etc. And they have to really gel together and the beats need to really roll, which they're not doing at the mo, imo. Also, the mix sounds a little flat and quiet. What software/equipment did you use to create it?

__
MySpace | Soundcloud | Drumnbass.be | Facebook
"It is far better to grasp the Universe as it really is than to persist in delusion, however satisfying and reassuring." Carl Sagan
30-07-2007 20:06 Homepage of Tomos
dJSkiLlAx dJSkiLlAx is a male
skillax


Registration Date: 19-01-2007
Posts: 33

Helpfulness rating: 
1 Vote(s) - Average Rating: 1.00

thx for u comment... software... fl studio 7 and Akai MPD-24 for drum. this is only 1 test... i make 1 melody for this track.
thx again...


.:SkiLlAx:.
30-07-2007 23:09 Homepage of dJSkiLlAx
Shinyuri Shinyuri is a male
myspace.com/shinyuribeats


images/avatars/avatar-2276.jpg

Registration Date: 05-01-2007
Posts: 422

Helpfulness rating: 
3 Vote(s) - Average Rating: 9.67

love the drums on this one, nuff work went into it i imagine. needs more to the tune tho, could do wth a lot more effects in the background and the b line could do with somink in the higher end of the spectrum too. keep workin on it, lots of potential.

__
www.myspace.com/shinyuribeats

revel in the crapness of the website and then hit the add button... go on, do it, u know u wanna
31-07-2007 07:34 Homepage of Shinyuri
tryptech tryptech is a male
Tryptech


Registration Date: 16-08-2006
Posts: 853

Helpfulness rating: 
8 Vote(s) - Average Rating: 8.63

drums are nice
swingy

love the drums and that sub is nice remidns me of krust in some way
not bad its just minimal
but can be apreciated

__
ANALOGUE (Tryptech)
31-07-2007 13:31 Homepage of tryptech
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
2161... the future.


images/avatars/avatar-3255.jpg

Registration Date: 30-12-2005
Posts: 6,413

Helpfulness rating: 
40 Vote(s) - Average Rating: 8.70

Cool thing to do for a first track, you got the basics right, now add stuff. Needs pads for atmosphere, a mid bass, some synth hook, a dubby vocal.

Boy if I could get my hands on this one.


__
Check my soundcloud (exclusive tracks on there)
01-08-2007 12:52 Homepage of BattleDrone
drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » dJSkiLlAx - LPS