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Registration Date: 10-08-2006
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Please check out my new track 'OVERDRIVER.' and post your comments here!!!
took a lot of you guys advice, especialy on editing the bassline i created the catchy tune with trying and finding something that worked.. it's different. i hope you like it
thx
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30-07-2007 01:19 |
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Tomos
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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There's some interesting and original elements here - especially the synth lines - but overall the track still needs a lot of work.
The first drop is a bit all over the place. There's too many different synths and bass lines all doing there own thing. They should all be working together to create a single vibe/idea but at the moment it's quite chaotic in there.
The bass line from about 1.07 until 1.50 sounds out of key with everthing else. Actually, a lot of the bass and synth lines sound out of key with each other. At high volume, that would sound nausiating.
The beats are ok but sounds very flat at times, particularly the opening beats and the beatdown at around 1.58.
Sorry to sound so negative! This track has some potential but the mix still needs a lot of tweaking and adjusting. I know this is a preview so there's time for that yet.
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30-07-2007 19:54 |
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Shinyuri
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interesting tune. yeh some bits sound a little out of tune on this one, u could try eqin some parts out so they dont so out of tune. other way would be to do what tomos is suggesting. really good ideas in ere tho. could do with a raise in volume - whack a compressor and a maximiser on it to increase the volume - until its just about to distort. keep at it - wanna hear the finished track
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31-07-2007 07:28 |
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Halph-Price
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good bassline. sounds good and everything. nice chords int eh background supporting it. you could have it going faster though. it's a quircky choon.
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05-08-2007 05:05 |
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Uberchile
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Registration Date: 14-05-2007
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intro dosn't hook for me , sounds a bit atonal, work out a key and stick to it, only have accidentals or pitch adjustmaent for dynamic influence in the structure.
the drums are ok but they dont have much presence which ruins the listening.
synth patterns seem to have little consitency after each section/phrase.
random noises only work when placed well, try not to repeat them so much.
the bass line is unclear and wobbles too much kinda annoying more than anything.
the structure phrase and section wise is good its just that each section sounds enharmonic none of the sounds gel to much, its good to have contrast but not too much.
overall ok needs work and VOLUME! first track i had to turn the bar up for.
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27-08-2007 18:50 |
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