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Schmidi Schmidi is a male
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Registration Date: 26-07-2007
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Please check out my new track 'Abandoned v2' and post your comments here!!!

Thanks for listening and the tips the first time around. Hope this hits the spot.

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29-07-2007 18:16 Homepage of Schmidi
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Well done Sch, this is definitely better. But I still think the beats need tweaking. Overall, they sound pretty good but the snare needs to be louder and fatter. But it's still good, don't get me wrong. I like the kick drum - very Wormhole-like. The shaker is better now too.

I love the beat variation at around 4.40. Great idea.

Don't like the vocals when they get really distorted and start hissing. They interfere with the sound. The Sci-fi vocals are ok, but sound a little cheesy to me. I'm not a fan of Sci-fi - well, if truth be told I fukin hate it - but they seem to fit the vibe of this track.

Good improvement Sch!!

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29-07-2007 20:38 Homepage of Tomos
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Nice atmosphere. I am liking the ideas on this one. I do not like the reverbed kick. It sounds too dull. More punchy one would be more suitable. Agree that the snare is too flat, and featureless. Like the bass stabs, nice bass you got there. All in all it is interesting track, which has Ed rush feel in it. You sure are inspired there as you said before. Cheers

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29-07-2007 21:54 Homepage of wrm
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needs a whole new master ( imo ) sounds like a early hardware tune to me. mix it down n stuff n it will sound sick

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29-07-2007 22:34 Homepage of CULTURE BOY
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easy now, i think with this one, u got the effects n stuff sorted but like what the others said it still needs some work on the mixdown. it sounds like early dnb - i know u got the inspiration from the earlier stuff for this tune but u should mix it down so it sounds more modern. earlyier stuff has got its charm but when u compare it to stuff now, it dont cut the mustard.

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31-07-2007 06:57 Homepage of Shinyuri
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