 Shinyuri - mental x |
Shinyuri 
myspace.com/shinyuribeats
Registration Date: 05-01-2007
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Please check out my new track 'mental x' and post your comments here!!!
easy now, hopefully this will get better reviews than the last one - liking it a lot more myself but im interested to know what all the heds on ere think about it,
anyways only a preview so it ends abruptly and still needs a tad more on the effects, build up etc
any sound problems or advice on the track are greatly appreciated tho.
this tune was made with a certain person in mind who has been fukin with my shit recently - not anyone from this site mind!
anyways @seven gun and surya, see if u can spot ur beats in there!
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revel in the crapness of the website and then hit the add button... go on, do it, u know u wanna
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28-07-2007 20:24 |
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Binary Havoc
Binary Havoc
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Hi,
Thought the tune was pretty cool. Like the way the old school high speed vocal filtered in was a good way to start. Need to go easy on the use of that sample though imo as it could get a bit annoying if overused. Drum programming is pretty tight although the snare comes across a bit flappy. Bass synth is cool although lacking a bit of sub imo. As you point out in the info, it definitely needs some effects and a better mix to pull it together as well as builds and drops. First reaction though is keep up the good work! Nice one!!
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28-07-2007 21:44 |
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Seven Gun
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moshe moshe
excellent.
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28-07-2007 22:36 |
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Seven Gun
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got some moving fusion style sounds going on.
i think if you can progress with this sound,
you could blow up in a big way.
as long as you keep the dancefloor jump up element.
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28-07-2007 22:56 |
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BattleDrone
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Not really feeling the lyrics thing (smurfs on helium) but that´s taste. Lyrics don´t fit to the atmosphere of the rest of the track imo. Maybe put them at half speed and pitch them down a bit?
Don´t put reverb onto your snare. In fact the whole tune has a bit of stereo enhancing going on which makes things worse imo. Not feeling the first bass.
Try ripping of bassdrum and snare from some break and use them as I get the feeling that these 2 don´t benefit the overall quality of your track.
Some nice effects going on, some good instruments too. You are improving.
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29-07-2007 01:44 |
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Tomos
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I really love those vocals! How did you do them?
Overall, the track is excellent. Definitely feeling the jump up vibe on this one, it's my style. Love it. The basses are really good. Loads of effects on them, they're sounding really sweet to my ears.
My only gripes are with the beats. They're good but the snare is a bit too low with too much echo, imo. The hi hats are too loud and up close, with too much middle in them. They may give you a headache at high volumes!
A good solid basis for a great track here Shi!! Can't wait for the full verso. Another cool tune from ya.
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29-07-2007 10:03 |
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Schmidi
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Registration Date: 26-07-2007
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YEAH, MEAN SHIT!!!! Would definitely kill a floor as far as I can tell. Keep it up!
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29-07-2007 18:20 |
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CULTURE BOY
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29-07-2007 22:17 |
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goonybag
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cool, like the drop a lot. sounds like the kik has reverb on it? does not seem to punch as much as i like 
fuck yeh, youve done some cool editing in this one, and your use of synths/samples is great. I like it when the main riff idea is chopped into different sounds. cant wait to hear the finished version, big up.
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