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wrm
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Please check out my new track 'Never stop' and post your comments here!!!
Here is the final version. Check it out peeps!
cheers
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28-07-2007 19:00 |
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Shinyuri 
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like it dude - the congos are a nice touch is this the finished version? its too short mate - i wanna listen more! anyways nice thick bass sound u got going on, all the sounds sound good and seperated, the second drop adds more to the tune definately but a couple of odd note choices imo. anyways make it longer! go back to the original drop after the second. ends too abruptly imo.
anyways - liking the beats man.
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28-07-2007 20:17 |
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BattleDrone
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Sweet, you obviously put a lot of work into this track. Sounds really loud (but balanced) and clean, mixing is top notch, good atmosphere, great melodies.
It sounds great but (but, yes, something to nag about as usual)...
The instruments sound very clean, standard, especially the saxophone, when it returns after 2´though it sounds wicked and fits in great.
The end comes too sudden.
With the right mix this track could become an anthem in style of "The man with the red face" from Laurent Garnier.
The second time it is playing it has kinda grown onto me and I love it.
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29-07-2007 01:37 |
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Seven Gun
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again, very sweet composing of samples here.
i still think the bass lacks something. it has nice warmth,
just needs more oomph.
deffo too short. is that on purpose, to hold something back?
if not, you should make it at least 4 1/2 minutes long.
just cut n paste the first sax riff/melodie to drop back in,
then make a nice stripped down outro.
not so sure about the change in notes of the sax on the 2nd drop,
the change kinda took me off my groove, if ya catch my drift.
i got it....
if you could make the bass more like logistics "together",
where the low note really does damage, that would make me a very happy listener. That, and a bit of work on the stucture, and
you have a release on your hands for sure. 
very good work mate
big upz 
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29-07-2007 02:42 |
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Tomos
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Excellent, excellent start. Those percussion drums sound really crisp and work perfectly with the sax and pads.
I still think the beats need to be a bit louder, but I do like how they work their way into the track before the first drop. I also love the drum patterns, I wouldn't change them.
I really like the second drop. The track definitely benefits from some variation at that point. It would be too easy and predicatable to simply repeat the same melodies throughout the whole track.
I agree with the others that it ends far too abruptly. Sounds like it was an after-thought, like all your time went into the start and middle but you almost forgot that it needed an equally good ending to round it off?
But overall, a great, great track wrm!
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29-07-2007 09:47 |
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wrm
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cheers guys, I am glad u like it. I put a lot of work in it, but true is a was a bit lazy with the end. Shame on me!!! He, i will rework the outro. But I wont upload the new version here cos it would be just mess here so I will post it on MYspace profile and let u know. cheers
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29-07-2007 14:20 |
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wrm
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I uploaded the final version on my profile on MYSPACE
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29-07-2007 23:47 |
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tryptech
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Ai wrm youve improved lot since last tome i heard a song of you
great job
that sax
mmm
thats the shit i like
some really chilled out stuff
noting bad to say bout it
love the mastering
love the structure
i could listen for hours to this
9 outtah 10
cause a 10 canneevr be earned
a song is never perfect
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31-07-2007 13:10 |
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wrm
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cheers scaranja, really appreciate your words....RESPECT
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31-07-2007 14:14 |
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wrm
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Originally posted by GreatFisherCat
Man!
Guys, It's time to get our contacts running, this tune is 99% perfect except that synth sax, which bugs me out. I know few open minded sax players that might not be afraid of drum'n bass, I would be more than happy to ask them out if they could record live sax riffs to this tune.
Apart from that, this rocks!
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Cheers for review man, but i must say that that sax isnt that bad sounding to me. Yeah its synthetised but i think its pretty reality-close. I think SaxLab vst is pretty heavy tool to get closer to a real sound.
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