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Schmidi 
Producer
Registration Date: 26-07-2007
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Please check out my new track 'Abandoned' and post your comments here!!!
Big fan of Ed Rush and Optical sound from Wormhole era. Also a big fan of the movie Aliens (NO I DIDN"T SAMPLE IT- all original vocals here). Hope you feel it!
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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The best DnB was made 10 years ago, I'm slowly building my time machine...
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28-07-2007 00:39 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Vocals are a bit too loud, need de-essing.
Drums seems to drown a bit in the soundscapes, cut the low-end of the soundscapes (<300Hz).
The first bass sounds to "clownish" (sorry for expression) for a dark track. From 1:40 on it sounds ok though. The shaker loop needs to be at double speed and should have more high end.
Really like this track, dark´n dirty. The mix is pretty muddy though. Clean up the 200-500Hz area. Any instrument that doesn´t need presence in this area should be cut there.
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28-07-2007 11:27 |
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epicsound
Steppa
Registration Date: 05-04-2006
Posts: 94
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really feeling it.
just wish the beat was more banging.
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28-07-2007 14:39 |
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Shinyuri
myspace.com/shinyuribeats
Registration Date: 05-01-2007
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cant really add much - just get it remastered and stick it up ere again. definately good ideas - can tell where u got the inspiration from. u make those samples yourself then?
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28-07-2007 15:44 |
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Tomos
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Yeah, Wormhole is one of the best DnB albums ever made and you can definitely hear influences of that in this track. The beat is pretty good but needs to be fatter and louder. It sounds too far in the distance at the mo and it's being swamped by the vocal samples and the shaker, both of which are already too loud. The basses are excellent though. Sounds like you've put a lot of work into them.
Not too sure about the vocal samples. There's definitely a place from them but at times they are too loud and prominent and ocassionally take over the track.
Cool track tho. I love the Wormhold vibe.
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