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wrm
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Please check out my new track 'never stop' and post your comments here!!!
Hello peeps. Summer is here in full strength and I bring u this tune to warm your days even more. I hope u gonna like. Its just a preview of what I´ve done so far so any comments are very appreciated. Have a nice holiday!!!!
cheers for the DNB crew
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27-07-2007 00:09 |
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Schmidi 
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Hello, first review here! You definitely have some nice atmosphere going on in your track. I can picture a sun drenched festival field with a little breeze and the grass (as well as people) swaying to the beat.
The drums are crisp and work well with the music. I would add some thick crash cymbal every 16 bars or so to accent progression in the track.
Nice synth strings in the background that add a seriousness to the tune.
It may just be my taste, but I would switch what the piano and sax are playing. IE: the piano is playing the more intricate part, and the sax be flying over the top of that with longer notes.
Also (maybe the sample just didn't get to the bass yet) but it needs a really driving bass to put this over the top. Think more Reece than 808 kik.
Sounds good so far, all the best, Schmidi.
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27-07-2007 03:00 |
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Sephiroth
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nice chilled out vibe on this track.
liking that little sax (i think) riff at the start, drums sound a little weak for my liking tho.
doesn't seem to be any sort of drop either, a bassline starts but then never seems to to come in with the drums, guess its just a preview of what you've done and more is gonna get done to it.
think you need more drums, maybe sum breaks layered on what you already have might thicken the presense of the drums a bit.
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27-07-2007 11:00 |
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wrm
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cheers sephiroth, you got that. Its just a little preview. i ended my work just here and I am going to build it more, no worries
I am gonna work on the break more. Agree with you
cheers for reviews
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27-07-2007 11:11 |
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Shinyuri
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very chilled out blunt smokin vibe. yeh this would be a nice summer tune man, liking the melody done on the sax. sounds a tiny bit midi like tho - try adding a bit of modulation in places and maybe some different attacks on some bits to humanise it a bit. yeh dunno wot ur using but on some sequencers there is a humanize function which dequantizes everyting by a small amount, sometimes it sounds like a load of old turd tho... anyways the pads and the effects give it a real nice atmos to it. drums could do with a beefing up imo. anyways sounds like the tune is really leading up to somink nice, cant wait for the full version
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27-07-2007 21:00 |
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Tomos
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Lovely chilled out melodies. Love how all the instruments and pads are working together. But like the others are saying, the beats need some work. They need to roll and thump. At the mo they are awfully flat and thin. Shame really, cos with a decent beat behind the melodies this tune would be A1!!
But still, excellent work wrm!!
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27-07-2007 22:05 |
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Seven Gun
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excellent sounds. really like the composition here.
the instrumental side of things is spot on here.
maybe the sax is a little too dominant tho.
turn the kick up a bit and layer a slightly beefier snare on top of the one you have.
very cool sounds tho.
sweet.
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