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worm
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Registration Date: 07-07-2003
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Please check out my new track 'A1A (Beach Single)' and post your comments here!!!
fresh, bouncy, fun.
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25-07-2007 23:19 |
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BattleDrone 
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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At the start I thought this would be one of those heavy 'n dark stompers, but the thing cleared up and felt like summer. Doesn't sound bad at all, but it needs more elements: some pad chords are essential to get this baby going I think atmospheric elements and some bleeps & blops here and there, some non-sub-bass would also fill it out. It is also quite repetitive.
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25-07-2007 23:25 |
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Binary Havoc
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Registration Date: 25-07-2007
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Good Intro, sets the tune up nicely. Drum programming is the standout part of the tune for me and is varied enough to hold your interest. Melody is a bit repetitive and choice of sounds could be better imo. Liked the drop at 3:48. Liked the tyre squeal sample although it probably wants sitting back in the mix a bit.
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26-07-2007 17:07 |
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Shinyuri
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Registration Date: 05-01-2007
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dark intro! that first sound tho sounds a bit oddly equed to me tho. anyways i like the boingy sound u got going on. yeh the drum change ups sound cool n a little retro, its cool how they build up over the tune. yeh that drop later on - round 347 is one of the best parts i think - really old skool notting hill esque. i agree with BD that it would be good with a more mid bass thing going on - not a big fan on those appregiated sounds over the top of it. anyways nuff bitchin cos its a cool track mans. keep at it.
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26-07-2007 19:13 |
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Tomos
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Excellent build-up! Decent beats throughout. The melody is a bit simple and one-dimensional tho. It needs more elements and changes to make it more interesting. It's pretty much that same note changes throughout the track.
I agree with Binary that the drum programming is the best part of this track. Some good changes going on there with good, crisp sounds.
Nice track overall.
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26-07-2007 22:12 |
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worm
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thanks for everyone giving me some great criticism
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26-07-2007 23:26 |
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dip_registered
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Registration Date: 19-04-2007
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like the build, like the synth, and yes, sounds like summer rather than darkness!
synths are a little wishywashy for my liking...i like the drums and the bass...
....drum and bass.....
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I'll edit ya face to sit tight there in the mix
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10-08-2007 09:06 |
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