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19-07-2007 17:50 |
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Tomos
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Some really good breaks in there! You managed to make them really heavy but still sound quite minimal, which is refreshing. I love that two-note distorted guitar riff sample from 2.05 to 2.31. Really dark and evil, almost like a metal tune. That guitar squeal which plays straight after the riff is good but a little loud, imo. Brilliant fill from 4.34 to 4.37, btw.
The structure of the track needs a bit of work. It's a little bit all over the place. It plods along too much for my liking. I'd like to see more dynamics going on in terms of loud and quiet bits, downbeat stuff to more full-on stuff.
But hey, that's no major issue - this is a killer tune, no doubt about it!!
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This post has been edited 2 time(s), it was last edited by Tomos: 21-07-2007 15:56.
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19-07-2007 22:17 |
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Tomos
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Since nobody seems to be reviewing this track I'll provide a few extra comments, if that's ok.
I've listen to this a few times now. One thing which keeps concerning me is the sound - you need to crank it up a few notches. It sounds a bit weak and flat. It's a shame because I think the track is really good! I'm not sure what software you've used but it may simply be that you need to turn up the volume. That generally works when I'm using FL Studio.
Some of those bass stabs sound quite flat. You need to give them atmosphere - perhaps by adding a phaser, flanger or chorus effect with some reverb.
I love the main snare sound, and I'm still really liking the middle section when the distorted guitar riff drops. Nice Mandela samples too - reverb and delay is working well and I like what's he saying too: "Recognise that the world is hungry for action, not words. Act with courage". Word!! 
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21-07-2007 15:55 |
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DRS
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nice broken beats. i would put more percussion on the break in parts, bass line quite jokes but all in all a bit empty. i assume you are going for the minaml vibe which aint my thing, but not a bad example, the high the high part around 2.46 is destorted and sounds horrible i would deffinately change it. i would cut the delay time on the vocals as well on the latter drop.
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22-07-2007 00:20 |
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really like the bass on this one, reminds me of some dirt raves that ive been to, could imagine some dirty mcing over this to set this one off. the drums sound a little confusing at the start but hey thats the djs job to deal wiv that.
agree with tomos on that it needs to be a little louder tho.
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22-07-2007 09:56 |
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