 Shinyuri - teriyaki burger {ebi fry mix} |
Shinyuri 
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Please check out my new track 'teriyaki burger {ebi fry mix}' and post your comments here!!!
hello everyone - yeh this is a redone version of teriyaki burger - this time ultra crisp with hopefully no compression overkill!
anyways hava listen n tell me whats good and whats not. all advice is greatly recieved - wouldnt be bothered making tunes if u guys didnt give ur two cents.
big up .be massive!
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14-07-2007 16:13 |
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Halph-Price
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reminds me of the muisc from Streets of Rage. nice song. this is such a nice song, i love. so freash soundin. the drums are average, but the synths and melodies are so good. actaully the kick sounds a bit dull, the snare is pimp though.
i love teh track,t eh change ups are good, the mix, other thent eh kick, seems well, amybe all a bit bright, but you wanted it to be crsip, but on a club speakers it would come out harsh sounding.
good track man, i'll keep and eye out for your other stuff.
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Halph-Price: 14-07-2007 16:33.
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14-07-2007 16:32 |
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BattleDrone
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Nice stuff, agree with halph there!
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14-07-2007 18:06 |
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Tomos
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Massively improved sound on this one! Definitely no trace of compression overkill. That bassline is pretty mean! Love it. And I still love that fill you do with the kick drum and snare - dum, dum, dum, dum, etc. Makes me wanna dust off the Slayer albums and do some serious headbanging. 
The only thing I would change is the sound of the bass - it sounds a little flat at the mo. If this was my track I'd inject some low-end growl into it to make it really heavy and evil. It really needs to grab you by the throat and throttle you - but it's not quite doing that at the mo. Also, the snare is a tad overpowering in terms of volume. But good sound tho.
Nice one Shi, great track!
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14-07-2007 18:29 |
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stickbubbly
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nice track
i like the spacey intro.
drop is sick, leads into a nice dark melody. some nice twistin and bendin.
good track overall. drums could use some more layers, perhapse some conga's or a drum loop would fill out them out some more.
cheers. enjoyed it!
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15-07-2007 01:26 |
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CULTURE BOY
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15-07-2007 15:12 |
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Seven Gun
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uuurrrrgh!!!!
dutty track.
i liked the first version but the redo was deffo
worth it. sounding very nice.
again, the style totally works.
only thing to make it even better would be
to add more bottom to the bassline.
boost it between 50hz/80hz. that should pump some more meat n potatoes to it.
but thats just picking bones on what is a super track.
mighty shinyuri.
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16-07-2007 02:46 |
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Shinyuri
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nice one u lot - ill get on the problems - yeh every time i try n add more drums - the bass just overpowers them and it seems a bit sacriligious to eq the bass out more than it is. also i fukin hate mastering!!!!! wish there was one button u could press to make it instantly pro. anyways u live n learn...slowly
yeh - all the bass noises are made on the malstrom - one of the synths in reason - no samples used {except for the atmos noises and drums "course} can never get bass samples to sound good.
anyways once again thanks for the advice - will sort the probs but wont repost - dont wanna spam this site with redos.
respect to the .be crew
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16-07-2007 08:38 |
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Seven Gun
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Originally posted by Shinyuri
also i fukin hate mastering!!!!! wish there was one button u could press to make it instantly pro.
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WORD!!!!!!
that would be the most popular button ever made 
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16-07-2007 14:51 |
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Halph-Price
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Ozone 3, you set-up the style of muisc, and it's pretty much a one stop mastering. personally i use a bunch of plug-in's from voxengo. the Elephant Mastering Limiter, is all you need though, and it will do the best quality compression i have heard from a plug-in before.
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16-07-2007 14:53 |
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D Juice
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hmm, this is really weird,
really like the tune at one side but my conscience tells me not to.
good sides of your track: the beat is cool, espescially the snare, and the break at 2:15 are cool. effects over the reece are quite nice.
somehow there's an undeniable bad side to this track. the beat is empty, and the melody of your synth becomes really boring after some time.
this means you do really have a good basis to stand on, but it needs work, in my opinion.
Keep 'm rollin' mate
D Juice
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17-07-2007 11:38 |
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DRS
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very clean, good mix. i would fill it out a little bit sounds quite empty in parts. really like the build up and first bar of the break downs. that cuttoff automation on the latter part of the melody works very well. i could hear it going off well on the dance floor, with some fat subs behind it. good job
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21-07-2007 23:59 |
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