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Rude 
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Please check out my new track 'Provius 4' and post your comments here!!!
This is an edited version of one of my older projects.
Cheers.
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13-07-2007 10:22 |
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Rudeone
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drums are too much in the back and the bell sound is pretty repetitive. lows sound muddy with the synth line
the melodie is nice though.
got potential but needs work
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13-07-2007 14:02 |
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BattleDrone
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There is just very little buildup from the intro to the main part. In the main part some stuff is clipping (mid-bass with snare?, try sidechaining) after the vocal ends things seem to improve a bit, but still there is some clipping going on. At 1:17" the drumkit suddenly changes, sounds better though. Why this sudden change? Maybe you should use it all the time? Due to the fat synth the track sounds too full and bussy for my taste.
Sweet pads, bells, melodies... we are used to quality stuff from you 
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13-07-2007 15:07 |
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Halph-Price
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wait, what the fuck.
rude and rudeone, what the fuck. ...... what's the difference?
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13-07-2007 15:31 |
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Shinyuri
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this is a good track but it definately needs eqing. seperate all the parts proper, maybe give the main bass more edits too to change it up a bit. as the main bass goes i like it - my style of track, mmmm...overpowering bass....
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13-07-2007 16:46 |
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Tomos
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The high pitched melody reminds me of Luniz's "I got 5 on it". Good track overall but some of the bass gets quite distorted at 0.48, 0.54, 0.58, 1.04, 1.53, 1.59, 2.05, 2.11. The bassline itself is really good but the high points need to be levelled out a bit to stop it getting distorted. Also, because the bass is really quite loud it drowns out the high pitched melody somewhat.
Nice track tho, Rude!
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13-07-2007 18:33 |
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Rude
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Originally posted by Halph-Price
wait, what the fuck.
rude and rudeone, what the fuck. ...... what's the difference? |
I WAS HERE FIRST!!! 
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13-07-2007 20:43 |
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Halph-Price
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and you'll be the LAST! :@
the drop the bass and kick are fighitng for space, and are clipping, either cut som fo the bottem end and bit of the drums lower mid 200-400hz and/or put a limiter on the master track. that's a mastering issue there.
that arp has some deep bas at 2:30, might also be contributing to the bass fight. probably most definatly. well you gotta choose, which is the bass the bass, or the arp. if the arp isn't HP some of the bottem end. maybe make two, one for dropa nd one for whent eh arp is solo.
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14-07-2007 16:10 |
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Rudeone
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Originally posted by Rude
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wait, what the fuck.
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I WAS HERE FIRST!!!
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sry for beeing so rude 
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14-07-2007 19:15 |
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stickbubbly
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very nice tack.
if this track started at 1:28 and the second drop was your main drop i think this track would be killer. as of now i think the intro is a bit to light and empty.
hope you think about re-arrangin it cause its deadly.
nice work.
cheers!
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15-07-2007 01:41 |
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Seven Gun
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Originally posted by Rudeone
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Originally posted by Rude
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wait, what the fuck.
rude and rudeone, what the fuck. ...... what's the difference? |
I WAS HERE FIRST!!!
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sry for beeing so rude
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LOLOLOL.
who is rudest?
there is only one way to find out...........
FIIIIIIIGHT!!!!!
tune....
very nice lead!
kick/snare sound a little quiet tho.
nice arps, very nice.
lol, that bicycle bell thing sounds like an old dr dre hip hop sound.
i like it tho.
maybe the beats are a little too compressed/limited.
they need more drive
cool track overall.
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16-07-2007 03:14 |
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Rude
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thanx for the feedback, although most people were going a bit offtopic with the rude - rude-one thingy.
cheers
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