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philbee 
Future beats for the streets
Registration Date: 18-10-2006
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Please check out my new track 'nil by mouth (im not dead)' and post your comments here!!!
hello peeps,heres hopefully the finished verzion of the trac,added a few fx n stuff an a nice synth line,any wayz you guyz will here it,any feddbac recieved gratefully and grace fully,peace an onelove to da dnb.be massive,
forgot 2 say made with fl,tunafish,synapse wavelab,pd samples,wav samples,and my computer!
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by philbee: 12-07-2007 22:20.
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12-07-2007 21:23 |
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Lightningflash
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yes it sounds a lot like D&B than my efforts but I was listening and I could hear in my head a lot of thing coming in and out but in reality it was a little uneventfully.
I remember you commenting on my,n saying that you don't like to many breaks in the flow of the rhythm, this is a good example of what I expected from you and I'm sure many people like it.
I like it because you can get into the beat unlike my stuff 
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12-07-2007 22:37 |
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Shinyuri
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rudeness. i can imagine a few people cowering in the corning to this one while gettin mugged. definately a head bopper.
needs more edits imo tho and maybe some more work on the eq to make it sound all seperated like. the drop could do with being more defined aswell, maybe hav a filter going on the breaks or somink.
anyways a good track
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13-07-2007 08:13 |
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Rudeone
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ez philbee,
drums are a bit too much up front imo. sounds like they're clipping? intro needs more goin on. bass might need more mids, fuller soundin. synth is soundin nice.
tune has got style but its too repetitive for me likes
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13-07-2007 14:07 |
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BattleDrone
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The intro is quite ok, I like the stabs a lot. When the drums come in they push everything into the back, even the stabs can´t push through anymore.
The drums seem to come in a bit too early as well.
The track has indeed little action, but it rolls like hell and it doesn´t need a lot of other things going on. The groove is so good it can last on it´s own.
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13-07-2007 14:59 |
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Tomos
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Minimal, dark, heavy beat - this is my kinda style. The sound is a bit off though. All the loud stuff, particularly the beat, sounds distorted like it's going too far into the red. Also, there's quite a few low-end sounds fighting for space. It tends to get quite muffled at times. You need to bring some clarity in there.
Having said all that, I still think it's a really great track. I love that really low bass going on in the background. Gives it a big Ed Rush/Optical feel, which can only be a good thing.
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Tomos: 13-07-2007 18:18.
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13-07-2007 18:16 |
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philbee
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cheers guys ,yeah the eq ing on the drumz does need a fiddle
it is tendin to wash out other sounds in places,,anymore?
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13-07-2007 21:05 |
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Halph-Price
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nice intro, very sharp drumz, but you don't seem to mind the bass and the kick fighting for space, that bugs me. that and the lack of any change ups and variations what so ever. it's what they call 'old skoolz' maybe.
but yea, you def need to move a little of the bottem end of the drums out, a bit of the 200-400hz mid bottem too, give the bass more room.
nice synth going with the bass. zero variation here too. you can drop the beat, through in another drum, make another synth come in for one stab only, play wtih the durm pattern, or something a little bit.
you got the main track down the meat and potatoes, so to speak, but the finer details seems missin. but yea, it's a dance track. nice work.
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14-07-2007 15:53 |
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stickbubbly
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solid work.
nice heavy drums, good levels. nice dark rollin melody.
your just missin some more variations to keep me interested. some drum rolls and some melody switch ups on every fourth frame would help.
cheers.
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15-07-2007 01:56 |
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Seven Gun
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sweet as a cucumber mate.
nice progressive, running along kinda feel to it.
*borat*- "its niice, i liiike"
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