 Ethereal - Breeding Hatred (Ethereal Remix) |
Ethereal 
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Please check out my new track 'Breeding Hatred (Ethereal Remix)' and post your comments here!!!
Remix of a friends tune. Don't have a link to the original though. Decent enough, though I expect a lot of helpful criticism if there are any reviews. I feel like you guys here could donate a lot of helpful advice.
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"drum'n'bass eto bezdna sovershenstva" translated: "drum'n'bass is the impact of perfectness" ... "Bad Ambitions" - Subwave
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09-07-2007 20:58 |
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CULTURE BOY
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easy mate! not my style of track but it dont sound too bad at the mo. beats edits sound cool some samples sound a little too muffled,riff is a little lifeless too but its not the worst track iv heard. break in the middle needs some extra vibes to it (imo) big up
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09-07-2007 21:47 |
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Tomos
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Great tune. I like this style. Love the basslines, love the beats. However, the overall sound is a little muddy. There needs to be a wider range of sound frequency because there's quite a few effects and samples figthing for the lower end of the spectrum, particularly in the build up. The vocal sample is a good example of this - it's way too muddy and sort of loses itself amongst the other low-end sounds.
Apart from that, you've got a good kick-arse track.
Nice track name by the way! How sweet.
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09-07-2007 22:03 |
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BattleDrone
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At 2:56 there's a lost snare...
Not my style, there's no story. The intro is plain 4/4 hardcore. There's no real buildup.
Technically it's not bad, but the sound is a bit muddy.
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10-07-2007 11:45 |
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Shinyuri
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yeh definately agree with the others on the eqing, needs to be equed so all the sounds are seperated more - when the bass and the drum come in together the drums lose the high end. i like the drum edits, specially when it gets pitched up.
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10-07-2007 17:57 |
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Surya
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EQing needs a lot of work
Buildup is... wel, like said before: no story
Melodies don't seem to go anywhere. Just a bunch of notes one after another.
Sorry man, didn't like it. Drums could be nice with some extra EQing and layering though!
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10-07-2007 19:53 |
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Ethereal
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Thanks a lot to you all, its much appreciated. I will definitely read up more on EQ's and see what I can do about it. Also on melody I presume.
This was my first track in Reason in a long time, and first in 3.0. So I'll see if I can't fix some things up and do what you guys suggested. Again, much thanks.
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"drum'n'bass eto bezdna sovershenstva" translated: "drum'n'bass is the impact of perfectness" ... "Bad Ambitions" - Subwave
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10-07-2007 22:52 |
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Lightningflash
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Nice stuff
intro a bit long not that sold on the bass but its a good listen, some work in this...
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12-07-2007 23:03 |
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Halph-Price
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nice intro. maybe can have the vocal sample a bit louder, what bright drums, they're nice.
there is something missing whent eh drums and bass are rolling, you need to have some erie pad goin on, there's to much space.
there is some atmos sounds noticable at 2:50, they maybe be to quite. try compressing them.
if this si a drop at 3:20, you def need a pad for this, it seems like the rest of the song. it's so empty and not a Sonic Assault.
it's a nice track, and besides the bassline sounding like digital distortion, i like it.
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14-07-2007 16:03 |
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