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rodi
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Please check out my new track 'mellow cloudy fluids' and post your comments here!!!
I've started this 1 30.05.07 , and finished it today , it didnt take me so many hours to make it , i wasn't inspired i guess 
Anyways here's a track of a Cloudy day which was 30.05.07 and btw the day i finished it ( today ) is the same wheather , so hope u enjoy it
P.S. I hope the wheather will be better and i hope to see the sunshine today , cuz im going out
peace
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09-07-2007 19:10 |
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Shinyuri 
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love the feel of this track, really laid back n u get that it was made on a chilled day. drum edits are sweet. take off the mid on the record scratch tho. love the whole old record feel of it. maybe the pad stabs at the start of the record need to be equed better sound a bit too loud atm.
this is perfect for listening to to forget the world n space out thru a crowdy city. digging this vibe, sounds very natural - good for when ur stuck in the cheesey music capital - tokyo
love the way the drums suddenly get hifi, nice breaks goin on when that happens, make the track longer, i wanna hear more of the hifi drums so i dont have to keep rewinding.
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revel in the crapness of the website and then hit the add button... go on, do it, u know u wanna
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09-07-2007 20:44 |
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Tomos
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More of an instrumental hip hop track than Drum n Bass but interesting neverthless. The overall sound, however, is pretty bad - it sounds way too minimal and thin. (What software did you use to produce and upload the track?). The song structure is pretty good with nice fills and the beat change at 1.53 is excellent. I'd love to hear more of that in the track! It has much more mileage. In fact, from 1.53 onwards it should really turn into a proper DnB by developing that beat even more, rather than going back to the hip hop style beat which kind of just repeats itself.
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09-07-2007 21:52 |
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rodi
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thx for the feedback guys
Tomos , naah i wanted it to be something chilled something mellow funk cloudy , thats why i was sticking with the more hip hop beat i guess its more trip hoppy
BIG UP
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09-07-2007 23:58 |
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Seven Gun
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ez rodi.
dont like the guitar sample mate.
it has a hiss on it that does not sound great.
when you drop it at around 2 mins, the tune sounds better....quite good in fact.
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10-07-2007 01:08 |
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rodi
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there is no guitar ;D
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10-07-2007 07:58 |
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Seven Gun
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sorry, the double-bass sample then.
it has poor sound quality, and distracts me from the tune.
tune sounds cool at 1.54 onwards.
needs some sub in there, and more fx imo.
nice ideas rolling around.
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10-07-2007 14:01 |
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Halph-Price
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nicly done intro, very jazzy. this si the track, this doesn't seem dnb enough to me. it's a sleepy track, oh here we go a bit faster beat, i was falling asleep. nice with chang-ups often enough. and the paino is perfect. yuo might want to have different timed delays, they all seem very fast. which is weird for such a slow track.
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14-07-2007 16:29 |
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