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wrm
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Registration Date: 13-09-2006
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Please check out my new track 'come back again' and post your comments here!!!
Finally a DnB tune I am satisfied with. Been a while since I made a dnb tune. So check it out and review. Comments much appreciated
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09-07-2007 01:02 |
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Seven Gun 
dotbee 4eva
Registration Date: 16-01-2007
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nice simple rolling beat.
cool dubby sub too.
oooh, this one evolves nicely.
very nice work.
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09-07-2007 04:15 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
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I'd expect the tune to explode at the point where it ends now. Structure is a bit too ambient now, this needs an uproaring lead imo.
Could use a bit more high end, especially the pad, it sounds a bit muffled now (boost your master a bit in the 8-10k area). Good drumsounds!
Sounds promising.
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09-07-2007 12:59 |
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rodi
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Hey there wrm ...
Listening to ya tune , likin what i hear ,though i've already heard 2 spots where ear catched some rhythmatic takeoff if u got my point , ill get back to it l8r
Yea , everything is quite clean , im not turned on by the whole idea i must say
But its deffo aint bad id put it a hmm 7/10 and wouldn't delete it after dling
So back to the rhythm takeoff 
the 1st 1 is @ 0:10
the 2nd 1 is @ 0:31
peace dude , good stuff , keep dem comming
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09-07-2007 13:03 |
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Shinyuri
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yeh , could definately c myself spacing out with these sounds. that pad is slightly overbearing imo tho. nice hook u got there too, quite catchy. it does sound like its gonna go mental when the tune ends - would b fukin awesome if u put some mental bass crazyness there.
anyways good track
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09-07-2007 13:58 |
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Rudeone
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drums soundin good but could be more punchy. strings are nice maybe a bit too much up front. needs more deep bass
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09-07-2007 14:31 |
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DJ BZ
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nice vibe, everything sounds nice n clean. nice tune, not really my style of dnb but nice work.
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09-07-2007 15:15 |
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wrm
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hey guys, cheers for replies. Gonna work on it forshure. thanks for advice
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09-07-2007 15:20 |
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Tomos
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Not my kind of Drum n Bass but I did like the break-down at 1.30. The beats sound a bit wishy-washy to me. Perhaps you could put some more thump into the kick drum. The snare is thin sounding too. Needs more beef in it. The pads are ok but a little over bearing.
Sorry to be so critical - just not my kinda DnB I'm afraid.
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09-07-2007 21:33 |
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CULTURE BOY
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09-07-2007 21:55 |
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Halph-Price
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sweet bassline. none of the track is muffled, they are just guys with blown ears from too much loud muisc. the bassline is very dub style, but it seems to be stero, which isn't so good, get more oomf from mono basslines.
maybe it's not stero, it seems very slightly, could just be the panning. the song dies before the second drop.
but yea, i dunno what's ment by everything seems dull, the pads the drums the synth everything si PERFECTly mixed. just the energy in the trcack is lacking.
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14-07-2007 16:40 |
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