 Lejitt - Twizted Synapse |
Lejitt 
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Registration Date: 17-06-2007
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Please check out my new track 'Twizted Synapse' and post your comments here!!!
I had to make this in a few hours using cubase for a competition at college, but its very rushed, so this is just a taster of what the finished track should be like.
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08-07-2007 16:13 |
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Tomos
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Sounds a bit too slow for DnB but nevertheless it's very good. The beats roll really, really well but sound a little distorted to me. Some of the sounds in the intro sound distorted and loud also. Great melodies - I'm bopping my head to this one as I write.
Great tune overall - I really like what you've done with the hi hats and rides.
Wouldn't change much apart from removing the distortion on the beats and some of the pads.
Can't wait for the full polished verson!!
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08-07-2007 17:30 |
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Shinyuri
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Registration Date: 05-01-2007
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some really banging ideas u got goin there, personally i rekon u need to make more of an impact for the drop - have more of a build up or somink, more of a crescendo. anyways that bass n the drums make me n my flatmate bop our heads but it needs to be mastered better - eq n pan things better n u got an awesome track. also some vocals wouldnt go amiss either.
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08-07-2007 18:35 |
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hardplnsdrftr
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Registration Date: 07-03-2006
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This really need a lot of EQing overall.
Everything is fighting for space in the intro, as well as whats going on throughout the song.
I think you should chnage up the bass once in a while to add variation.
Ideas aren't bad at all, just needs to be executed a bit differently.
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09-07-2007 06:01 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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lot of blur in the mids, work your EQing please.
Sounds pretty fool. with some small changes this could be a reall killer jumpup track
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09-07-2007 11:13 |
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