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it started pretty well...but damn, that piano( or wateva it is) really dont go with the rest of the sounds. It falls behind. That really bothers me. But it is nice chillout track...It could be perfect but fix the timming of the piano...cheers
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28-06-2007 21:25 |
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Acoustiks 
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Its pretty good. But there are some problems of just stuff is out of key. Always try to keep things in key. But at one min it really picks up. That Sax sample is out of key. Also the Rhodes seems a little off. I also do think there could be more to the break. But it's still pretty good.
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28-06-2007 21:34 |
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Tomos
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Hmm, not bad but some of the sounds are just not fitting together at the mo. The synth piano sample is definitely out of step with the beat. It's repeated far too often and becomes quite annoying to be honest. The flute is good though, so too are the percussion sounds in the beat.
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29-06-2007 00:20 |
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BattleDrone
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Please redo this track and fix the off beat off key problems and use a more powerfull break and you'll have a sweet liquid track.
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29-06-2007 01:06 |
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Seven Gun
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with the rhodes/piano timing.....
if it is just a musical wave loop (which is what it sounds like), why not put it in a slicer instead? you can edit and quantize the notes
to make them spot on (use the metronome whilst doing it).
on the rest of the track.....
i think its very cool, and i'm liking the sounds.
its one of the styles i try and make sometimes, but it always ends up more jump up????
around 1.00, you should not do so long a pause too, maybe put a longer delay on the snare that fades out. beats sound nice n soft and work well with the smooth bass.
still tho, go back to the piano, it spoils what is a nice smooth roller.
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29-06-2007 04:57 |
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rodi
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Yea , thx guys , ill work on things u've said , gonna post a rework here soon ...
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29-06-2007 11:05 |
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rodi
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Originally posted by Acoustiks
Its pretty good. But there are some problems of just stuff is out of key. Always try to keep things in key. But at one min it really picks up. That Sax sample is out of key. Also the Rhodes seems a little off. I also do think there could be more to the break. But it's still pretty good. |
Thx for the comment , but try to be more precise when ur writing a feedback 
I don't know where did u find a sax , and i cant understand "things here and there are off key" tell me what second what kinda sample ... cuz there are alot of samples in the tune man
To BattleDrone , naaah i wont do the break more powerful it would sound not as i've wanted it to sound , the 1st name of the track was "relax ur mind" so a powerful beat doesn't suit the name huh
Hey guys by timing u mean that its used far too many times ? Or the sample sounds out of rhythm here and there ?
Thx for ur support but could u anwser those questions plz so i could finish the track and it would be perfect ...
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29-06-2007 11:17 |
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BattleDrone
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I don't mean you should pump in some distorted amens or so. You should use a break that has a bit more presence than this one, the ghosts are to blurred and silent and all sound alike. The individual hits should be more defined. That's all.
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29-06-2007 11:22 |
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