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Lightningflash Lightningflash is a male

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Please check out my new track 'population time bomb' and post your comments here!!!

this track was made all arround a drum loop sample I found on this site.
in the file Surorabreaks bigbang.

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28-06-2007 00:15

Seven Gun Seven Gun is a male

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listened on some shitty tiny headphones, so cant give comments on the mix.
at least this sounds like its definately more dnb.
not feeling it too much tho, sorry.
i thinks the beat is good at first, but it starts to tire.
maybe the tune needs some classic heavy sub-bombs in parts.
needs another angle for depth too.
maybe a switch in theme halfway thru the track would be cool.
some nice effects on the break tho.
my prefernce is for bass heavy tracks.
peace.

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28-06-2007 03:52

hardplnsdrftr hardplnsdrftr is a male

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This seems to lack the complexity of most tracks you have posted here hitherto; but that's probably because thisis a bit more out of your element I suppose.

Nice effects, and it has moments, but overall this track sems to lack direction, and doesn't do much of anything TBH.

Keep at it though, always good to try new things.

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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by hardplnsdrftr: 29-06-2007 05:20.

28-06-2007 05:05

Tomos

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I actually like this. Some of the things you've done with the beats are quite interesting, although I think there's too much echo on the snare. It needs to be tighter and sharper. The snare is dominating the beats at the mo. Also, I think you repeat the "Urban populations will..." sample far too often.

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29-06-2007 00:11

BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male

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Don't play with panning so much, drives me nuts when listening on headphones Doped

The vocal is too loud near the end, it's clipping. Track is all drums and just a little bass as it seems. The things you did with the drums sound a bit too brutal/simple sometimes, after a while it becomes repetitive. Some new elements would avoid that.
Good atmosphere.

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29-06-2007 01:14

Lightningflash Lightningflash is a male

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Yes Your right I put this together to quickly. I think I was worried those snares would damage my hearing.
Thanx a lot for your help Ill be a bit more patient and repost it when I'm properly finished.

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29-06-2007 22:27

cynik

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Originally posted by Lightningflash
I think I was worried those snares would damage my hearing.

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29-06-2007 22:35

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