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Shinyuri Shinyuri is a male
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Please check out my new track 'teriyaki burger' and post your comments here!!!

was inspired by trying to eat a teriyaki burger, it was a hard bastard to chomp down on lemme tell u. u gotta love mcdonalds!

anyways, its not really finished, just want some advice on how it could be improved - eqing etc.

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26-06-2007 17:23 Homepage of Shinyuri
Seven Gun Seven Gun is a male
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wow, i like your style. the last track i liked too. more than the voting score it got anyway!
same style with this one too. its like tekky jump up, which i love.
unfortunately, it has the same problems.
far too much low mids going on and sounding muddy. maybe its overcompressed?
this is in big need of good mastering.
the ideas are amazing, it just needs to boom out much clearer on more ends of the sound spectrum.
wicked potential mate.



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26-06-2007 17:42
Shinyuri Shinyuri is a male
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nice one boss, ill get on the case, btw had a look at that eqing thing that u linked on the last tune, u got any good info on mastering and mix downs?

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26-06-2007 17:50 Homepage of Shinyuri
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what software do you use for producing?

with the bass, i like to make sure i can "feel" it and not just hear it.
turn up the low end at 50hz (or so) as much as you can without it
clipping and distorting, or just until it has more meat n potatoes.
i'm still working on my mixdowns too.
damn production, always something to be better at. lol
peace.

edit....
change your settings so i can PM you.
i just tried, but you have it blocked.

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26-06-2007 18:05
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Yeh, nice track but there's too much going on in the mid-range - it's gets muffled. You really need to get some clarity in there, particularly on the beats. It goes into compression-effect-overkill on occassions too. Similarly, that bassline is brilliant but I think there's too many effects on it. I loved that fill-breakdown thing you do - dum, dum, dum, dum, dum... brilliant.

Nice track, really enjoyed it.

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27-06-2007 20:03 Homepage of Tomos
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