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Greyone Greyone is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Tortured By Darkness (VIP)' and post your comments here!!!



Yoooooooooo i made a new track

Could be that the sub is some too loud cause i gave it a last boost before i saved it

made in FL7

Style = Greyone style hehe Big Grin

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This is the VIP version , hardcore-ish


This track has been deleted because a new version is available

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26-06-2007 02:24
hardplnsdrftr hardplnsdrftr is a male
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Great intro.

Real nice production, everything sounds good, sub sounds fine to me.

I really dislike the main synth line; I find it rather goofy TBH, and I think it contrasts with most of the heavy darkness of the track. It's a bit jump-upish for my taste.

But I really do like a lot about this track, the drums sound great, and I like how it goes into a half step beat at times. Excellent use and choice of samples. Lots of cool stuff.

I just don't like that main synth riff at all.




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26-06-2007 04:21 Homepage of hardplnsdrftr
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Like the intro, good soundquality, good vocals. After the intro the track changes direction and goes too much into a 4/4 pattern for my taste, the break should play a bigger roll to avoid that. Also the halfstep part is not for me Smile

All in all good stuff though

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26-06-2007 09:40 Homepage of BattleDrone
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thanx , yeah i had some probs with the high frequencyies as they needed to be filled and i didnt know with what , so i just took a synth

im gonna look for differenty synths , not that sharp and more dnb'ish

thanx
26-06-2007 13:34
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ah you basstard.



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feel the rave vibe !

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26-06-2007 14:37 Homepage of syneptic
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pff i realy dont know man , im allready making a 2nd version cause i allready disgust it Frown

its always like that
26-06-2007 14:41
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wicked intro. love that shit!
shit mofo, you got talent.
i prefer the part where it goes more into the standard darkstep break. that bit is heavy, liking!
vocals are fuckin spot on.
i like the breakdown.
think you should use the techy squelch sample,on your intro, more times in the track.
still, this got plenty of cool elements to keep it running.
not my style of track, but its a fuckin hottie!
big up.

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26-06-2007 17:10
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maybe take a touch of reverb out some elements.
just a touch.

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26-06-2007 17:11
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aight , 2nd version is made , so i'll keep this one as a VIP version

Im loading it up now : Greyone - Tortured By Darkness
27-06-2007 18:05
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quote:
Greyone - Tortured By Darkness (VIP) = the bad one , the one with the synth , the original is better


ROFL

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Hardcore!! Well put together, professional sounding - no probs with the sub for me. Really interesting and original, particulary from 2.00 onwards. Loved the vocal samples! Great breakdown at 5.07. Nice original track.

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now stop it stop it,build up is filthy like the way it grabs my head and makes me feel the pain that they are having in the background. then it drops into some beats that make me wanna stop typing and groove down like the way ypou use the speech as the break in the drums, like the actuall speech but mabye twisting it a bit would be nice.
liking the way you twisted the drums in the second half of the track leading to the slow break beat for the head nodders out there, then slap wake up, into the break with the horn stabs and begging only tro drop down in to filth with the nice amen rolling under it all the break at round 3.50 ids nice then to carry it on into the last part is nice mabye bringing it oput would be good but well you know more than me but enjoyed this one as i have with most stuff you do nice one

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supa dutty Devil

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30-06-2007 06:19
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Realy Nice Number,
It sounds nice, and the samples are also nice.
My qeustion to you is can you send me the samples whit the text in it?
Like Darkness?
01-07-2007 12:42
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its quality work

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02-07-2007 00:39
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haha the synthmelodie makes it sound like a hardstyle tune mixed with d&b.
I don't like hardstyle. but this is fun Big Grin
I find the vocal sample just a tad overused. but I like everything else.
02-07-2007 15:25
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intro is sick - like the heartbeat in the background.
Bit heavy for my tastes but good shit nonetheless.
Drums are real crisp, real nice stuff from you as always
Break downs and stuff are nice, real give the track structure, keep things moving along.
Think the vocal sample is a bit overused - less is more on this one i think.

Overall very pro stuff and structure is cool. Quality track

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09-07-2007 13:58
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thanx yeah will cut some voc's out on this one
10-07-2007 13:37
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