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cynik 
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Please check out my new track 'undergrounds' and post your comments here!!!
a tekky industrial one in the oven
comments appreciated
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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19-06-2007 23:10 |
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Lightningflash
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lovely
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19-06-2007 23:45 |
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Seven Gun
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"ooh, you're going to love this" lol
nice work.
naughty track.
bit industrial for my tastes, but its well done.
starts to tire a bit later in the track imo.
is missing a little something to give it that next level wow factor.
maybe a complete switch in the break, or a change
to the snare pattern later on.
good but not great
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20-06-2007 16:48 |
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Tomos
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I like this, especially the drum patterns in the middle of the track. Good vocal samples too. However, I think the bass could be more prominent. It's too far back in the mix, imo. The bass tune is very good though. Also, some echo-laden high-end sounds would balance out all the low-end drum thumping.
Nice tune though.
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20-06-2007 18:46 |
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cynik
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cheers
yeh this is practically the intro with not much progression when it drops. having problems with the bass being audible along with the kick. might just leave all bass out and go with a hardcore kick
any more comments?
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21-06-2007 07:07 |
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equipped
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fuck sake, dutty tune and then some, fucking smasher heed in, dig how your filthy bumhole used all the dirty ol school computer game, bbc and or sctv sorta soundin sounds, whole tune is forshure bigger than anything ive heard from you big man, gritty sound, absolutly rippin detailed intro, never heard anything close to it, and vocal just nail's it, nice work Cynik, cheers and thank's for the treat.
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21-06-2007 07:15 |
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cynik
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Originally posted by equipped
all the dirty ol school computer game, bbc and or sctv sorta soundin sounds |
heheh guess you mean the 808 drum machine, a thing I borrowed from my softer production tools, glad you likin it
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21-06-2007 07:23 |
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equipped
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man this is deep, all the layer's you got in the back with all the angry sampls is beuty, that one big industrial soundin reverbed sample is heafty. dutty tune, cheers cynik.
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21-06-2007 07:36 |
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H.ill
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I love this one dude, nice intro sounds, beautiful break construction, perhap's the bass is not fat enough, but still rollin'. Looks like a preview, looking forward to hear the final one.
Cheers.
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21-06-2007 18:09 |
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DjSlut
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808 intro?!?!
Wow it actually works pretty well. MORE FUCKING COW BELL!!!! Yes this is right up my street. Excellent drum programming but some of the drills need touching up. The bass works extremely well with the jagged yet rolling feel of the drums. Maybe more build up for the drops would not go a miss but thats a matter of taste i guess. Well placed vox and all. Nicely emphasised down beat - me likey. Fills on ur drums fit v. well, although they do sounds pretty weird (i think thats the intention)like insects or something.
Good tune!! Cant wait to hear the end.
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21-06-2007 19:35 |
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Seven Gun
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just giving this another whirl.
get those reeces n leads up a bit louder.
2nd listen is a charm mate.
fucking bad little track!!!
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21-06-2007 23:52 |
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demolitionkid
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nice tekky stuff man. the 808 cow bell sounds a lil out of place in the intro.maybe turn it down a hair.bring the reeses up and the beat just a tad bit.i really like the drum edits the classic heavy dnb drums 
keep it up man
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22-06-2007 06:48 |
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cynik
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oi thanks for all your comments peeps
theres been a lot of changes on the main parts since this preview, deff going to post the finished version once it happens
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22-06-2007 07:28 |
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hardplnsdrftr
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great arcade style intro with the big stabs n hits.
Nice glitches that go along with pretty nice drum patterns. Great use of effects and the continuation of arcade sounds thru the track as it progresses. I'd pitch up the snare or add another higher pitched/ metallic snare for some more variety.
Cool sound, very original IMO. Your tracks definitely have a distinct style I can now spot, which is a good thing. great start. finish it up!!!
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23-06-2007 09:04 |
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theaudiodemon
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Yes EZ cynik loving the techy vibes and nice round b-lines defo some positive feedback from me on this one, liking the mashup beats sounding like Limewax 
also plenty going on here defo one for the harder edge people, nicely mixed down ... keep up the good work !! Not much negetive stuff I can say about this tune really, I think the samples are really well used but some of the panning on the samples take you by surprise at first but still sound all good. I like the use of breaks on this one.. Shall be listening to some more of your stuff as it comes, biggup!
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25-06-2007 22:00 |
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cynik
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25-06-2007 23:12 |
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Greyone
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yo bitch 
the tracks starts with nice cynik sounding intro
aaarh i hate those cowbels sory
buildup is nice but could be more intens (hear that in some of your other tracks too)
Drops great but not "whooow" the drumpattern is not done correctly (structure of the darkstep loop is corect , but the drums itself are not complete)
you need a strong bassline or yuou need some basstab beneah the snare , some more clashing drumstuff aswel , imo in this track there should be a 4/4 drumpattern
for the other sounds is it ok , very cool atmo and surprises and variation
cynik quality
just the drums
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26-06-2007 01:55 |
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cynik
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