 Electric Sky - Deep Mystique (demo mix) |
Electric Sky 
Producer
Registration Date: 07-08-2006
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Please check out my new track 'Deep Mystique (demo mix)' and post your comments here!!!
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16-06-2007 12:01 |
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realy like the drop with the vocals at 1,12
nice sweet bassline at that drop!!
the intro is not constructive for the song... maybe you should try a more basic, minimal intro, less atmo synths, the melody is nice, but it's too much...
deep sound indeed 
reminds me of some old tracks on good looking!!
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16-06-2007 13:31 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Not bad at all.
You need to work on the EQing I guess. The pads are rather problematic, they take way too much space, leaving hardly any room for the guitar melody (which sounds slightly off compared to the pads). Take out the low end from the pads and make sure their high end is pushed up further (don´t overdo it).Make sure your deep bass stabs have some more sub to give them power. I can hardly hear your kick come through and the hihats are rather silent as well.
I´m not going all wild about the vocal, but it´s ok.
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16-06-2007 23:45 |
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Seven Gun
dotbee 4eva
Registration Date: 16-01-2007
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very nice ideas and vibes in this tune.
intro not fully fitting.
i'd possibly turn down the pads a touch and pitch them up. taking out some 250hz on eq could work? and also bring the guitar much more to the front of the mix cause its nice.
actually, maybe even drop the pads all together, hmm, dunno.
on the beats...
they are programmed nicely, and fit the track well, they just need re-eqing a bit.maybe pitch up your kick a tad, and add bass at between 80/100 hz to taste, then it should punch through a bit nicer. i also sometimes add some mid and high mid on my kicks. that could help ya maybe?
the dirty wob bass stab is too heavy and distorted. scoop a touch of low end out of it.
anyways, all said and done, you have yourself a real winner on your hand with this track.
just needs all its elements re-eqing.
good work.
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18-06-2007 17:15 |
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Wolohlo
Newbie
Registration Date: 13-06-2007
Posts: 8
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joa kewl drum... the stringsound remind me to strong on a trance beat! not my style!! but you have a nice female voice in it!! general: good beat but to boring!!
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12-07-2007 17:29 |
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Halph-Price
Zombie Algorithm
Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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the drums are really bright, if played in a club they'd come out pretty harsh. the phazed guitar in the start is a bit quite, not as much high end it's harder to hear it, it needs precens. distortion to brighten it, or compression, or just eq the high end up a bit on it.
nice vocal samples. i like the track, and are you too good to give track info *sad face*. well it's a short track also.
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14-07-2007 16:13 |
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