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Seven Gun 
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Please check out my new track 'The Creeps' and post your comments here!!!
something i have been workin on the last 2 days.
i'm feelin it so far
no name for it yet.
feedback and comments would be apreciated.
cheers.
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14-06-2007 17:19 |
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philbee
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HAT!!drumz are crisp as man ,as usual,lovin the atmos in the intro,drop is great ,lovin the bassline switches,you should call this track stabbed up,cause the mentasm stab your using at the end of the pattern is wicked m8,peace
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14-06-2007 17:28 |
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Tomos
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Reminds me of Dillinja (which is no bad thing!). Big fat, tonne-heavy beats with fat, distorted basslines to match. Particularly impressed with beats. The whole thing is working well together. No complaints bro.
Overall: 9/10
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14-06-2007 18:29 |
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BattleDrone
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Not bad!
Try to use some other bass instuments from time to time, I hear your usual basses there... 
Basslines could be more rolling too. Work it!
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14-06-2007 19:10 |
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CULTURE BOY
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nice drums!!vocal sounding sweet as is the synth in the intro. haunted style for shure, the second drop comes as a slight surprise but gives the tune some added depth! good work bro
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14-06-2007 19:26 |
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cynik
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good beat if a little simplistic but that was the idea I suppose
wobbles again..
good vocal
the rave sound is sampleish, not really blending in. imo you should reeq it
then boring same old till the end..
dunno, sounds ok but it has no real theme to speak of xcept for that vicious pad which is btw not really fitting the vocals
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14-06-2007 21:45 |
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Halph-Price
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you got me using the 3osc now for basslines. it aint bad.
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14-06-2007 22:01 |
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this tune is proper puker m8 big big it up u know that
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15-06-2007 05:17 |
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Seven Gun
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Originally posted by Halph-Price
you got me using the 3osc now for basslines. it aint bad. |
yeah, i love it.
its what i started on at first, so i got my shit down with it.
used synapse junglist on this track too.
@battledrone..
there are six different home made bass samples on this track.
got a haunting female vocal moan to go on this too.
called the track, "The Creeps"
any more?
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15-06-2007 05:26 |
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Halph-Price
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to be honest even though they are snappy drums they are a bit to loud at the 5k mark, which even though most jungalist are def there, i find too loud and really irritating after pro longed exposure. makes my ears itch.
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15-06-2007 05:37 |
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Seven Gun
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i'll have a check on the 5k tommorow, but i think the drums are the right type
for this kind of track.
might add another layer or two yet
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15-06-2007 05:57 |
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Halph-Price
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oh yea, they are the right type, i am just saying that a lot fo times, the most uninttuative thing to do when mixing drums is to turn down the high end. it amkes it appear snappier. the snap actually comes at 1k, the crisp higher up, but 5k of all freq at the same volume, appears to sound louder, and can really over power.
a lot of time on high hats i find myself turning the high end on them down, or making them quiter. hats can be half as loud as the rest of the drums and still be heard quite clearly through the mix. there's nothing at the high end taht really competes for the freq range. it's just the drums and they are super loud and competing with nothing.
now, really high end sounds will drown out freq lower then them. this is why you don't hear the 40hz in a white noise. it's just the high end you hear. so if you turn down high end, you actually open up the freq below it a lot more.
this isn't an obviouse thing
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Halph-Price: 15-06-2007 07:40.
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15-06-2007 07:39 |
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rodi
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Big up drumhead
I'd stick to the 2nd drop in ur preview its more crazy !
and the vocal totaly suits it i mean the rasta 1 , i suggest adding even more combinations of bass m8 , btw log in to msn sometimes need to talk to ya ...
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15-06-2007 10:25 |
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I would drop this!!!!!
i mean it, that drop at 1m48 is perfect, a wobble thing, but with the ragga accent and a more dark atmo, I love it!!!
just forget the first 90 sec. and start at that second drop!!!
listened to it like 7 times in a row now
indeed like the old sound of dillinja, that a very good thing 
i like the drum, but a bit more variation is always good, but not that important in this tune...
when is it going to be signed? 
greetz!!
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15-06-2007 13:09 |
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PEAHEAD
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drums are nice n phatt. AHHHH NO NO NO that pad that hit i have and ive used that exact one. its from one of psiteches packs isnt it. wel thats a bit of a downer now all im thinkin about is that pad. the one what firt hits in at 122 or sumthin.
wel anyways
that wobble is pretty sick kinda reminds me of gdub - miami vice. sure u dint sample gdub?
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16-06-2007 07:57 |
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Seven Gun
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@peahead...
yes it is from that pack (thnx for tellin the world!!) 
it was a little flat tho, so i've used chorus, reverb and eq'd it a bit.
i think it sounds nice n deep.
@cynik..
i've eq'd the tech hoover, taken some bottom out of
it so it is more subtle. used it more on the intro too.
i think it adds a nice extra element of power.
i've left the vocal on the intro cause that fits fine.
@halph....
taken a touch of the high end out of the beats.
found the extraction of some 8k had better results.
took a tiiiny tiiiny bit of 5k out too.
done a few more beats edits, a couple more bass edits
and swapped the ragga sample
for a darth vader sample. (sounds better, fits the track more.)
thnx for all the helpful comments.
this site is still a POWERHOUSE for good!!! 
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16-06-2007 14:58 |
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GiMP-DJ
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HEAVY. feeling the little dirty bass wobbles lol
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18-06-2007 19:13 |
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hardplnsdrftr
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Drums sound nice and fat. I like the rave stab.
Track is quite redundant overall. It needs to vary a bit more. There are no surprises at all. And I like surprises.
The rave stab gets a bit old later in the track tho and is used a bit much.
I think you have a pretty good start, you just need to add some wicked drops and FX and such to make it stand out a bit more.
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19-06-2007 06:32 |
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theaudiodemon
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Yes Mister tunes getting better each and every time... nice use of sub there. dont think they is personally enough going on from my point of view but I like the structure and change of bass every revolution. liking the beats but I think the snare should be brought down more or the high hats a bit louder to the ear. Bass is good and level with the beats... maybe a bit more ambience/fx? Also experiment a bit more with your bass samples, I know you got a trade mark with your sound, maybe find new bass sounds that are refreshing to peoples ears. Overall tho good tune, keep up the good work bro!
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25-06-2007 22:09 |
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Greyone
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i said it before and i say it again:
You are an amazing producer Seven Gun , mr Talent
only minus points (dont worry you still got my 9,5/10
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-tracks starts off with the drums ... intro ? drup yu drums ut 40sec+-
-drums are just a bit too loud like halph price mentioned , snare is also a bit too harsh , just lower the velocity or something down. Have u used an 'overdrive' for you drums ?
-some atmo is a bit overused
and for the overall: Big up man ! every fits well and production is top notch , some last EQment (snare + Woble bass = clippin a bit ) and you got a killer 
nice lill variation too 
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