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lead:end 
straight up beastin'
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Please check out my new track 'lookin' busy' and post your comments here!!!
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13-06-2007 23:02 |
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Encypher
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smart as fuck i love it, wierd and wonderfull that lead line that comes in at 1;00 needs to be a bit cleaner and sharper cos uv already used a quite drfity disconnected sound for the bass, it muffels everything but apart from that i can hear alot of potential in this tune, hip hop intro is great!
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13-06-2007 23:52 |
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jonah
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i dunno its not really my scene, i think with that bassline u need way murkyer drums, like noisia/break. they need to flow around that bass. its got a nice energy though. like the bass seems well like dirty and does what it wants so i rekon the drums should be more liquid and not as rigid. like mess about with ur snare positions maybe, and make that hats more like i dunno syncopated or summin not sure of the word really.
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14-06-2007 00:48 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Intro was really promising, you somehow ruin it with too many bass going wild and those pizzicato hits are conflicting with your bass big time.
Remove the pizzicato thingy, work on your bassline so it doesn't sound so blurry and work some more on the builodup.
Vocals are neat!
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14-06-2007 01:07 |
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Tomos
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Didn't like the bass at first but it's growing on me. Don't think I've hear anything like this before, so you definitely get brownie points from me for being original. Felt the beats could be beefed-up a bit. They're sounding a tad flat at the mo. Nice song structure.
Interesting.
Overall: 8/10.
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14-06-2007 18:22 |
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Halph-Price
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nice fucking start, i want to do something like this. gangsta.
the snare lacks punch. now when it comes on after the "request line" it's cool, but whne it goes to double time you should layer on another snappier snare, maybe hats to.
you could also just layer on another drum kit with that. that would be good, lot of songs do that, don't even notice it unless you're really paying attention.
1. it makes it seem fuller sounding, whih is needed in this track, and 2. it helps defien song structure very subtly, it goes from being double tiem to the start of the song.
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15-06-2007 07:28 |
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intro is wicked!!!
indeed too much sloppy bass that's going wild
maybe you should stick by hiphop 
you're def feeling that vibe 
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15-06-2007 14:55 |
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PEAHEAD
Wicked Producer
Registration Date: 27-07-2005
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what is that. sounds shit acoustic, gd stuff was jus goin to say i thaught this was dnb.be not rnb.be
so yeah sounds alrite. but i think evrything needs more power. the bass is a bit to muddy for my liking
and could be built and structured better
like that snappy snare. but like i said before MORE POWER
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