The voice is great
some thngs are not fitting perfectly together
but your sond is awsome
i like it a lot
just try to fix it, like the main part
that high sound it too much leading the song, maybe ad some more kick factor to the beats, and filter sopme mid frequencies outah the bass
Reminds me of Pendulum! Nice fat snare sound. Some good basslines too, although some of it doesn't quite gel for me. But I really, really like the beat change from 2.06 to 2.17. I actually think you could extend and develop that a bit more - it has more mileage in it.
Nice track. overall: 7.5/10
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NIce intro, very pendulumish
the bass could need some automation, otherwise fine. The drum sample are nice, but i dont like the programming, it needs a kick between the snares!
I like that it has some background sounds in it, but after a while that saw lead is getting anoying. It would be good with a drop in the song and then a quick start again. The end is kinda sudden
(lazy?
) but otherwise the song is kinda cool.
I like the snare sound, its cool. I like the hihats too, but they are abit low.
THe track needs something to get the beat flowing more, more kicks and ghost snares, otherwise the track is awesome.
keep it dnb!
wel mainly i jus bin workin on that intro. slicin the vocals getting them to sit right.puttin sound fx iin, cars pulling up doors closing etc. big changes hav already bin made. and wil post updated version in like a week or sumthing
STILL SO MUCH WORK TO BE DONE SO DONT TAKE IT TO SERIOUS
but thanks for the replys. AND FUCK PENDULUM WATCH THIS SPACE
This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by PEAHEAD: 11-06-2007 06:25.
Originally posted by equipped
big cheers mighty Peahead, review in the work's.(greyone's got a crush)
wht bout greyone u lost me, explain
im a chate bag for replyin cause i can't review yet, but to answer that mighty Peahead, Greyone has made a post about you at least once every few month's since youve been gone, Greyone, who know's, he's a fucking weirdo, anyway thats all it's about and will forshure slap a proper review tomorrow, cheers Peahead.
yea like ideas in this one and progression.
Beats are way to far back in the track - need to give that sub kick a big vol boost and bring out the snares as well.
Cant really hear any any sub either.
Liking this one - work on the drums and you got a floor stomper
sterotypical track. i'd rather just buy hold your colors. if you're not going to reveiw then don't post a thread. just sit back and let the thoughts come.
i think that this songs needs a cowbell. just like, at one spot, drop the beat for a half a bar, and just 4 cowbell strikes. you can pitch and effect them to your taste, maybe some nice reverb. ya. really explore teh reverb with the cowbell hits... and maybe a full song.. yea.... what you get for 50% off reviews.
bass sounds like a long wet rolling fart. i suggest you take that synth, clone it, and scoop the bottem end out of one at about 300hz and get the other to be a pure clean and sub only, sine wave, or filtered for only 200hz and lower.
it would make that bass sound less like a wet fart and more like a bass line with a nice crunch top. like
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oh ya, you know what would make this track better... a drop. it starts, the atmosphere, then the bass and the drums.. then it just fucking ends after that.
thee's no drop, there's no build up.
there's not even a second drop or build up or middle eight, it's just an intro.
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This post has been edited 3 time(s), it was last edited by Halph-Price: 15-06-2007 07:25.
Originally posted by Halph-Price
if you're not going to reveiw then don't post a thread.
hate that!
i've never had one off you.
tune is ok tho.
although it is well done, the intro sounds too similar to slam.
bass need another angle too. sounds a little one dimensional.
not bad.
I'm not a fan of vocal intro's, but I can live with it
realy like the first bass that kicks in, very deep, not one dimensional, just like the drumz in that intro!!
you might want to make that "clap" a bit more metal or someting
bit more aggressive, try some samples like tracks from dylan of tech itch, would be perfect on it!! unless you like that pendulum sound :p
and indeed, some deep kicks and a drop would make the track much much better, but like you say: still much work to do!
cheers Peahead, sorry for all the delay's, diggin that vocal but its used to much and a bit to dry imo, maybe bounce with some effect's, heafty poundin edit's on the drum's, maybe bounce that main synth with some more proccessing also, this a heafty tune, nice work, cheers Peahead, and sorry hp, was havin a bad week, cheers.
(lazy? 
) but otherwise the song is kinda cool. 
