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wrm
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Please check out my new track 'Flying high' and post your comments here!!!
Okay, this is just the main theme of my new track. Any comment highly aprreciated. I made it just yesterday evening, so there is a lot to do. cheers
This track has been deleted because a new version is available
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06-06-2007 08:42 |
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Seven Gun 
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nice vibe, nice idea.
beats sound muffled a bit.
bass needs more volume and low end.
needs a string in there too.
like you said tho, only one night work,
so keep on it.
nice vibes.
peace.
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06-06-2007 12:53 |
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rodi
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how could i miss a tune with that name 
Hmm listenin' to it now so ill comment right away ...
Didn't like the lil' drop in the intro just intill its turned into a real beat , if u got my point ;D
I would make the bass more powerfull more sub more deep more heavy !
And do the kick more powerful so it could sound punchy enough
i guess that's about it
peace
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06-06-2007 13:30 |
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wrm
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cheers guys for quick listen, as I said, 1 night work so I did it quickly, just to put whats it all about. I am pretty busy these day so gimme time, and I´ll work on it
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06-06-2007 14:10 |
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wrm
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and one thing bothers me, I recorded the guitar. Then stretched the wav so it fits BPM, but now I just cant fit any chords in it, cos its off key with the main guitar riff. I tried to pitch the chords but still cant find the right tones if u know what I mean. Any tips on that? how to find right tones? My ears seem to go wrong on this one
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06-06-2007 14:16 |
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Tomos
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Yep, lovely tune. The guitar sounds are dreamy and sweet. I love guitar based music and this track is right up my street. I agree with the other comments, however, that the beats sound very thin. You really need to beef them up (but without overpowering the guitar riffs). Also, you need some bass in there to give it a really warm feel and put some drive 'oomph' into the song. But hey, it's a night's work, so well done. If and when you finalise this tune, please, please post it to this website so we can all enjoy!
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06-06-2007 19:12 |
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Encypher
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sweet harmony!! love it love it love it!! clean production, interesting breakdown but it works well with the style of tune, now it just needs lots of ambiant layers to keep ears interested in second half
good job, is nice to hear something thats not trying to be bangin!
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08-06-2007 09:00 |
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demolitionkid
where's demo?
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i like the guitar intro.nice groove in the intro.maybe filter the amen up and down in the beginning to give it a longer intro as well as more diversity.really a great groove,but it needs a chick singing about how much she misses her man(or woman) you know, some thing to accompany the wonderful melody. keep it going mang i want to hear this when its done.
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08-06-2007 17:55 |
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