drumnbass.be forum

drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » cynik - some thing
Go to the bottom of this page cynik - some thing
Author
Post
cynik cynik is a male
Cp6uja


Registration Date: 15-03-2005
Posts: 5,646

Helpfulness rating: 
49 Vote(s) - Average Rating: 7.86

Please check out my new track 'some thing' and post your comments here!!!

new track

comments appreciated


This track has been deleted on the producer's request

__
https://soundcloud.com/tsai-vidro-voves
02-06-2007 23:53 Homepage of cynik
@1$-)
unregistered
Rinse

bit messy when it drops but heavy none the less
03-06-2007 00:27
cynik cynik is a male
Cp6uja


Registration Date: 15-03-2005
Posts: 5,646

Helpfulness rating: 
49 Vote(s) - Average Rating: 7.86

yeah only reason on headphones for now

cheers

__
https://soundcloud.com/tsai-vidro-voves
03-06-2007 00:28 Homepage of cynik
@1$-)
unregistered
oh.

did i say Rinse
03-06-2007 00:30
Seven Gun Seven Gun is a male
dotbee 4eva


images/avatars/avatar-2384.jpg

Registration Date: 16-01-2007
Posts: 2,232

Helpfulness rating: 
4 Vote(s) - Average Rating: 9.75

not bad.
sounds like it needs a bit more time tho.
i agree, the drop is quite sick.
only heard quietly, so another listen LOUD tomorrow
is due.

__
"When you lose, dont lose the lesson"

This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Seven Gun: 03-06-2007 00:37.

03-06-2007 00:36
Tomos Tomos is a male
Infidel


images/avatars/avatar-2998.jpg

Registration Date: 15-04-2007
Posts: 2,276

Helpfulness rating: 
18 Vote(s) - Average Rating: 9.28

Yes, a little too much going on when the drop kicks in. The bass is really good and it'd nice to bring it a little more. It's being swamped by other sounds at the mo.

Nevertheless, it's a really promising track. A bit of refinement and editing on the sound FX would improve it immensely and make it a top notch tune.

__
MySpace | Soundcloud | Drumnbass.be | Facebook
"It is far better to grasp the Universe as it really is than to persist in delusion, however satisfying and reassuring." Carl Sagan
03-06-2007 13:30 Homepage of Tomos
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
2161... the future.


images/avatars/avatar-3255.jpg

Registration Date: 30-12-2005
Posts: 6,413

Helpfulness rating: 
40 Vote(s) - Average Rating: 8.70

+) Nice atmosphere, drums are well done, vocal is good. Good choice of instruments. Good buildup.

-)Intro is a bit long, 1:25 - 1:43 is a bit blurry. Track could use a boost (second drop maybe). Around 2:30 some variation is required.

__
Check my soundcloud (exclusive tracks on there)
03-06-2007 14:11 Homepage of BattleDrone
cynik cynik is a male
Cp6uja


Registration Date: 15-03-2005
Posts: 5,646

Helpfulness rating: 
49 Vote(s) - Average Rating: 7.86

a bit blurry is an understatement lol.

cheers for the replies peeps

__
https://soundcloud.com/tsai-vidro-voves
03-06-2007 17:39 Homepage of cynik
beable
Newbie


Registration Date: 04-06-2007
Posts: 4

Helpfulness rating: 
1 Vote(s) - Average Rating: 10.00

yo mang, nice ideas, nice reece and vibe of the tune. i think the intro goes on for a little long, once the original intro break dies down the track seems to die, rather then build. but its definetely a good tune!
7/10
04-06-2007 03:04
Halph-Price Halph-Price is a male
Zombie Algorithm


images/avatars/avatar-2869.gif

Registration Date: 22-12-2004
Posts: 6,160

Helpfulness rating: 
36 Vote(s) - Average Rating: 8.67

a lot of reverb is what is ment by blurry. that deep vocal just muddies up the micks with the kick and deep bassline rolling. this is why it's hard for me to want to put in basslines. they take up a lot and can make tehm muddy/blurry

the vocals, i know you recorded thoes, since most of the time people will make thre vocals quiter, becuase a) they are shy b) they know what they are saying. usually it's a). so don't be shy.

__
Latest Songs of filth and taboo depravity
SpankMyFilth on SoundCloud
She's got a nasty mouth...
FREE DOWNLOADS

This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Halph-Price: 04-06-2007 04:43.

04-06-2007 04:42 Homepage of Halph-Price
cynik cynik is a male
Cp6uja


Registration Date: 15-03-2005
Posts: 5,646

Helpfulness rating: 
49 Vote(s) - Average Rating: 7.86

can't imagine dnb without a bassline.

this is getting a whole lot better, will post an update soon

thanks for your input peeps

__
https://soundcloud.com/tsai-vidro-voves
04-06-2007 06:48 Homepage of cynik
Halph-Price Halph-Price is a male
Zombie Algorithm


images/avatars/avatar-2869.gif

Registration Date: 22-12-2004
Posts: 6,160

Helpfulness rating: 
36 Vote(s) - Average Rating: 8.67

quote:
Originally posted by Seven Gun
not bad.
sounds like it needs a bit more time tho.
i agree, the drop is quite sick.
only heard quietly, so another listen LOUD tomorrow
is due.


i swear i have said this before a while ago, but it's harder to sound good quietly then loud. if it sounds good quiet on headphones, it'll sound badass on loudspeakers.

this is why it's hard to emulate live muisc. they have bigger speakers.

you hear more critically to less on quiet. you FEEL loud music, and it triggers the threashold of sound, i think, which instantly brings intesne and energy feeling to the body. instinctivly, a loud crack is usually fallowed with an attack or a tree falling. the body gets MOVING when it gets LOUD.

one trick i learned, on the topic of loud, is that to get more energy in the music, the easiest was is to volume. this is why music has the pauses a lot. helps with energy.

movies do it, they usually crank it up with deep bass, and it makes ENERGY, without disrupting the normal sound of a movie. loud bass is harder to detect consciously then any other freq.

__
Latest Songs of filth and taboo depravity
SpankMyFilth on SoundCloud
She's got a nasty mouth...
FREE DOWNLOADS

This post has been edited 2 time(s), it was last edited by Halph-Price: 04-06-2007 08:13.

04-06-2007 08:09 Homepage of Halph-Price
D2o D2o is a male
Ghost


images/avatars/avatar-1834.gif

Registration Date: 30-05-2005
Posts: 2,545

Helpfulness rating: 
19 Vote(s) - Average Rating: 8.74

nice creapy intro.

this is dirty....like your mum Tongue

the drop is very messy.....need to take the bass out a bit before the drums come in so it has more impact. the drums get lost behind the nasty ass reeses.

get this cleaned up and your on to a winner. Bigup

__
WWW.SOUNDCLOUD.COM/VOLATILE-PSYCLE

This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by D2o: 04-06-2007 15:46.

04-06-2007 15:46 Homepage of D2o
Seven Gun Seven Gun is a male
dotbee 4eva


images/avatars/avatar-2384.jpg

Registration Date: 16-01-2007
Posts: 2,232

Helpfulness rating: 
4 Vote(s) - Average Rating: 9.75

Huh
unless its some kinda ambience, i beleive music should be listened to LOUD when possible.
had another listen.
louder!
best thing about this is the sick reeces used, i love em.
ya could use that lower note in your riff a bit more (that one is the screw ya face up note), i like when it hits that note.
bass is all good n dandy, but the beat lacks a bit of crispness on the ear.
snare seems to need a bit of high end.
will be checkin the update anyway.
not bad track.
peace.

__
"When you lose, dont lose the lesson"
04-06-2007 15:47
cynik cynik is a male
Cp6uja


Registration Date: 15-03-2005
Posts: 5,646

Helpfulness rating: 
49 Vote(s) - Average Rating: 7.86

quote:
Originally posted by Halph-Price
quote:
Originally posted by Seven Gun
not bad.
sounds like it needs a bit more time tho.
i agree, the drop is quite sick.
only heard quietly, so another listen LOUD tomorrow
is due.


i swear i have said this before a while ago, but it's harder to sound good quietly then loud. if it sounds good quiet on headphones, it'll sound badass on loudspeakers.

this is why it's hard to emulate live muisc. they have bigger speakers.

you hear more critically to less on quiet. you FEEL loud music, and it triggers the threashold of sound, i think, which instantly brings intesne and energy feeling to the body. instinctivly, a loud crack is usually fallowed with an attack or a tree falling. the body gets MOVING when it gets LOUD.

one trick i learned, on the topic of loud, is that to get more energy in the music, the easiest was is to volume. this is why music has the pauses a lot. helps with energy.

movies do it, they usually crank it up with deep bass, and it makes ENERGY, without disrupting the normal sound of a movie. loud bass is harder to detect consciously then any other freq.


review or shut up Wink

cheers men

__
https://soundcloud.com/tsai-vidro-voves
06-06-2007 23:23 Homepage of cynik
equipped equipped is a male
tired


images/avatars/avatar-2339.jpg

Registration Date: 20-05-2005
Posts: 3,818

Helpfulness rating: 
22 Vote(s) - Average Rating: 8.23

Cheers Cynik, diggin the rippin drum's, heafty synth detial's, gets a bit to buzy imo at part's, but all good, has load's of layer's, on me second listen your detial to the drum's is a treat to hear, there allway's changing, at the fade out was also diggin what you were doin, anyway a heafty track, nice work, cheers.

__
Space
07-06-2007 00:35
baz baz is a male
7


images/avatars/avatar-1379.jpg

Registration Date: 19-02-2005
Posts: 1,531

Helpfulness rating: 
23 Vote(s) - Average Rating: 5.96

oi cynik manz ; been a while since i've cheked ur stuff ;time to get bizzy then eh ?? Big Grin
intro is weird ; but cool tho'
diggin them fucked up vocals bigtime ;
that buildup is really huge dude ;
this is not religious ....
drop is overpowered by the reece's sub frequencies;
tune is banging in full tho ;really diggin it when i turn down my sub a bit ;
work on it
banger in the makinz
Bigup
rated 10 even tho the eq an leveling still has to get finetuned ; really diggin the idea (could be i've been out for to long Big Grin )

__
"shotgun ; slammin in yo chestpiece ; blaw"

This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by baz: 07-06-2007 16:05.

07-06-2007 16:02 Homepage of baz
cynik cynik is a male
Cp6uja


Registration Date: 15-03-2005
Posts: 5,646

Helpfulness rating: 
49 Vote(s) - Average Rating: 7.86

cheers for your reviews, Im gonna up a full version soon Drummer

__
https://soundcloud.com/tsai-vidro-voves
07-06-2007 19:11 Homepage of cynik
demolitionkid demolitionkid is a male
where's demo?


images/avatars/avatar-2248.jpg

Registration Date: 08-11-2006
Posts: 401

Helpfulness rating: 
1 Vote(s) - Average Rating: 10.00

sounds good cyn,the bass is a lil loud on the drop but its prob just me.
08-06-2007 17:48 Homepage of demolitionkid
cjstyles
Wicked Producer


Registration Date: 06-07-2005
Posts: 376

Helpfulness rating: 
1 Vote(s) - Average Rating: 9.00

tune is very sick mate although suffering from a few probs

Eqing is a little off though, sounds a bit muddy
Intro is very cool, but a little long.
Drums are bit far back in the mix.

Great stuff nonetheles - iron out these problems and you got a massive track there - if this was on the dancefloor i would go mental

__
NexGen / Plush / Liquid Brilliants / LDNBmusic / Ambra

Paul SG - Hidden Smile (CJ Styles Remix) forthcoming Ambra


11-06-2007 02:40
drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » cynik - some thing