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Seven Gun 
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nice intro. (i'm scared).
very morbid. nice angle tho.
tune is ok.
i think the kick and snare need extra layering.
kick needs more boom and bang (imo).
also, the panning on the main synth/bass
doesnt do it for me.
good atmosphere use.
not bad.
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02-06-2007 15:30 |
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Nick ZZ
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Registration Date: 29-05-2005
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Originally posted by Seven Gun
nice intro. (i'm scared).
very morbid. nice angle tho.
tune is ok.
i think the kick and snare need extra layering.
kick needs more boom and bang (imo).
also, the panning on the main synth/bass
doesnt do it for me.
good atmosphere use.
not bad.
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Thanks for the listen and feedback. Z
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02-06-2007 15:37 |
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BattleDrone
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Killer track man!
And it´s rolling really well.
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02-06-2007 19:20 |
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Halph-Price
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i tihnk the drums are fine cool ring on the snare.
at the end of your poem, you should get your girl to wsiper it in the background with some delay on it. always good to have whispers disembodied in the background. it would work as a counter to the coole ffect layerd with the vocal.
personally i would take one section and pitch it down near the end just to give a nice unhuman effect.
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02-06-2007 21:44 |
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Tomos
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Overall, very good. Great dark atmospheres and vibes. Loved the poem, fits perfectly with the sounds and I like the echo effect you've added there. Creepy.
However, I agree with the other comments regarding the panning effect on the bass. It doesn't really add anything - if anything, it takes some of the intensity anyway from a really good bass line (which reminds me of the darker stuff from Ed Rush and Optical - and that can only be a good thing.)
For me, the snare is very slightly too loud and slightly too high pitched. But that's just a personal preference.
Massive potential in this track - just needs some tweaking. Nice one!
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03-06-2007 13:40 |
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Nick ZZ
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Thanks for all the feedback, we knew it would be hit or miss with the panning synth based on past experiences. (Some don't like it) We also recieved some coments where people liked it.
We tried the synth without the panning and it sounded much more dynamic with it so we kept it in there. We will add some drum layers and EQ. Thanks for feedback and opinions. Z
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03-06-2007 23:35 |
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beable
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nice - reall good at creating a dark atmospheric evil vibe - reminds me of a barcode label type of track - however it seriously needs beefing up! maybe layer the drums and echo them in the bottom half - and the bass needs an underlying sub rolling to keep the heavyness in the tune. nice ideas, well on the way!
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04-06-2007 02:52 |
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Nick ZZ
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Originally posted by beable
nice - reall good at creating a dark atmospheric evil vibe - reminds me of a barcode label type of track - however it seriously needs beefing up! maybe layer the drums and echo them in the bottom half - and the bass needs an underlying sub rolling to keep the heavyness in the tune. nice ideas, well on the way! |
Thanks; we will add some juicy BEEF in there! Cheers brutha! Z
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06-06-2007 11:09 |
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Rudeone
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good vocal, great atmo, drums are ok. dont like the panning on the mid nor the modulation at all. too much width (and feedback?) and not enough heights for my likes.
id like to have more groove.
diggin it except for the bline
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06-06-2007 11:32 |
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Nick ZZ
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Originally posted by Rudeone
good vocal, great atmo, drums are ok. dont like the panning on the mid nor the modulation at all. too much width (and feedback?) and not enough heights for my likes.
id like to have more groove.
diggin it except for the bline
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Thanks brutha, we will fix that shit! Z
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