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easy now.
experimented with a different style on this track,
don't want to get stagnant.
bit on the tech side of things.
spent more time on this one so gimme some feedback.
first attempt at this kinda vibe.
thnx in advance for any comments.
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Seven Gun: 25-05-2007 21:40.
From tha start is kickin hardly my bleding ears
Love the vibe and vocal ,
more tech sound this one but with combination of this vocal it seems different which is allrgt.
I think it will be good one to jump and shout on tha floor
Like the beat ,nice one Seven !
Intro is cool, im a big fan of slides so this is right up my street. Sounds a bit like a number of old clipz tunes.
Drums are big on this one - my favourite bit.
Bass is pretty cool as wel, heres an idea - try making the bass a copy of the sliding synth melody you use at the start, just to see what it sounds like, was thinking it could sound quite cool. Bass at the moment is cool as well though
That opening rattling sound is nuts - gives a lot of atmosphere - perfect for an intro. Drums kick in massively - some nice subtle filtering. Like the vocal too. Drop is huge - would get a floor shaking for sure. Huge sounds - simple but very catchy - rolls along very nicely without getting monotonous. Not a big fan of the synth that come back in around 2:45. Some filtering or something would give it less of a preset sound to it. The return off the bass is massive! Nice one. Overall mix is really good - massive. A tiny bit of interference between the highs of your big grimey sounds and your hats. And sub could be a bit more prevalent. Otherwise the sound is huge and would fill every cubic cm of a club with this hearty chunky sonic soup!
can't call myself a big dog
but i'll leave a comment fosho
I suggest getting the bass lost here and there , just some MASSIVE WOBBLING , it would sound great i guess , the bass sounds nice but the buildup of it is too primitive , i suggest adding a crazy synth or a wobbling bass part every 8th time the bass comes , not only 1 combination , use many different ones ...
and i suggest lowering the volume in the places where u have the beat the synth and the vocal line ( the little vocal line , only 1 word or a sound
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nice track in general , if u'd let loose the bass here and there it would be WICKEDY WICK WICKED
oh and i've just listened 2 it for the 2nd time , make the drop lil bit further it would sound more crazy
i don't know why you say you don't want to get stagnent yet you attack me for having different styles in my tracks? this is the same shit as the rest just you have a weird ambience int he background.
if you finish this track you could do a lt different. i suggest if you want to "experiment" try having new elements added in the song, sometime before the second drop is usually good... i mean you don't have to do it just there.
feel free, at any time, to do something else in your songs,
ever...
just cuz you made this song in 2 hours and it sounded good doesn't mean it's finished or even all that neededs to be done. for a basic song it's a song. but for art it's a p.o.s.
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This post has been edited 2 time(s), it was last edited by Halph-Price: 30-05-2007 00:15.
yes man,really likin the trac man,intro drums bass(could be louder imo)lovin the vocal not really techy,got a great dance floor vibe,respect,full review when ive listened on a decent system(shitty laptop at the mo)peace bruv,big up yah self
cheers for all the feedback.
i spent 3 days on this tune NOT 2 hours H-P.
i now hate the synth on the intro and breakdown,
its far too light n fluffy.
that bitch is getting changed to a much grimier,
fleshier one when i can be arsed.
thnx again, peace.
but i'll leave a comment fosho 
i don't know why you say you don't want to get stagnent yet you attack me for having different styles in my tracks? this is the same shit as the rest just you have a weird ambience int he background.
