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lead:end 
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Please check out my new track 'RIIZE.' and post your comments here!!!
yeah, started making this couple o weks ago, but due to some serious pc issues it's stil in a beginning fase. used some samples from the download area... (i think)
so have listen, it's kinda melodic
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24-05-2007 23:46 |
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Surya
The Robot
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Don't have much time, so I'll keep it brief: there's too much reverb everywhere 
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25-05-2007 08:01 |
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Muad'Dib
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Wow, that beginning sound really scared me off 
nice sounds, me likes them. Those distorted drumz really are top notch! Very powerful, nice! 
I'm waiting to see what will happen from this one...
Ok, the kick and new snare strike in. The kick is maybe too loud, try fixing that.
Build up... hmm, not bad, but needs more work. The main rhythm strikes in. Needs more work, again. The sounds are great, but the rhythm needs more work. The snare is too loud and too snappy, a low power. Try adding to the lowend a bit, or cutting on the high-end (above 10 000 HZ).
The track needs more work, and remastering. Some sounds are too loud and some are very quiet.
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25-05-2007 12:41 |
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Seven Gun
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not too bad that.
think its better than 2 stars! (mean people, LOL)
i like the operatic sounds.
mixdown not great tho.
also gave a low score for shake factor because
of the lack of bassline.
i suggest layering a sub b-line under the main
string riffs when the full thing drops.
nice intro.
actually, this tune sounds like some kinda
role playing game music.
i wouldnt mind having a bash at remixing this.
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27-05-2007 23:13 |
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Halph-Price
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i think this is a very interesting track. the main synth string effect would do well with a very light flanger or chorus, just enough to add a bit of modulation to it, to take away from teh perfect digital sound and add some warmth. just a very lite touch of it.
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27-05-2007 23:28 |
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lead:end
straight up beastin'
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lol, maybe someday:p
but now i'm going to try and finish this, but the mixdown will never be good since is have to export every bit to listen if it sounds good, due to computer problems, when i try to listen to it the bpm goes down like a zillion times and clipping occurs.. also exporting a fragment of 10 secs easily lasts like 15 mins. or so, but hope is not lost since new gear is on it's way.
thanx for the review, very helpful
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30-05-2007 13:46 |
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Seven Gun
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Originally posted by lead:end
lol, maybe someday:p
but now i'm going to try and finish this, but the mixdown will never be good since is have to export every bit to listen if it sounds good, due to computer problems, when i try to listen to it the bpm goes down like a zillion times and clipping occurs.. also exporting a fragment of 10 secs easily lasts like 15 mins. or so, but hope is not lost since new gear is on it's way.
thanx for the review, very helpful |
ouch!!!!
what software ya using?
the guys on here will have some mega handy tips to cut most of that shit out.
peace.
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