drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » Scaranja - Woods Scaranja - Woods Author Post tryptech Tryptech Registration Date: 16-08-2006 Posts: 853 Helpfulness rating:  Please check out my new track 'Woods' and post your comments here!!! __ ANALOGUE (Tryptech) 17-05-2007 20:58 Seven Gun dotbee 4eva Registration Date: 16-01-2007 Posts: 2,232 Helpfulness rating:  nice vibes here. intro way too long for me. this sounds like its trying to be kinda liquid but not quite getting there. when it drops, i would leve the lfo at at more constant slower rate rather than it breakin to fast wobbles, i think it would sound smoother that way. the basic beat is quite nice n subtle, maybe needs a bit of filling tho. overall nice stuff tho. sounds like you can write some good stuff. i would stay on this one for a bit longer. peace. __ "When you lose, dont lose the lesson" 17-05-2007 21:14 tryptech Tryptech Registration Date: 16-08-2006 Posts: 853 Helpfulness rating:  Thanks for the reply, very usefull __ ANALOGUE (Tryptech) 17-05-2007 22:05 BattleDrone 2161... the future. Registration Date: 30-12-2005 Posts: 6,413 Helpfulness rating:  The intro is not too long, or the whole track is the intro, fact is, the track needs a boost after around 1 minute. Add some drum elements that create a real breakbeat to get rolling. you could add some shaker or open hihat or ride cymbal pattern too, but Ghost snares (or bass drums) really are needed here. Also some more variation might be good. Allthough the track is never boring, but it would add some colour to it. Really needs and deserves a second version. __ Check my soundcloud (exclusive tracks on there) 17-05-2007 22:20 tryptech Tryptech Registration Date: 16-08-2006 Posts: 853 Helpfulness rating:  shaall try to upgrade the drums and build more to the climax with some rolling shizzle and so thanks __ ANALOGUE (Tryptech) 17-05-2007 22:31 CULTURE BOY v v v iv a record missing Registration Date: 12-01-2007 Posts: 1,415 Helpfulness rating:  nice intro. nice simple beats the use of the pads is nice but when the tune kicks it is is lacking a big BANG! production and ideas is good but the tune is lacking something __ www.myspace.com/cultureboydnb soundcloud 18-05-2007 00:31 equipped tired Registration Date: 20-05-2005 Posts: 3,818 Helpfulness rating:  cheers Scaranja, review in the work's. __ Space 18-05-2007 01:12 equipped tired Registration Date: 20-05-2005 Posts: 3,818 Helpfulness rating:  > is a great listen, structure roll's allong, that shit is impressive, your heafty detial to the whole tune thing is forshure gonna pay off, it's a bit empty as it is at part's right now but fillin it up is the easy part, you've laid out a heafty tune in every way, the only that really need's heafty work's is your drum's imo, almost sound like a metronome, what im tryin to say is you've built a real funky loose flowin track around a way to stiff beat imo, the drum's just need load's of fill's, snippit's of break's ect, cymb's, build it up and then pull away your main dry beat, this is a great listen though, forshure diggin it, heafty heafty, cheers Scaranja. __ Space 18-05-2007 01:48 tryptech Tryptech Registration Date: 16-08-2006 Posts: 853 Helpfulness rating:  thanks I know the beat is ti stiff but it isnt bad though , i mean the equalizsation of it is okee isnt it __ ANALOGUE (Tryptech) 18-05-2007 02:30 equipped tired Registration Date: 20-05-2005 Posts: 3,818 Helpfulness rating:  quote: Originally posted by Scaranja thanks I know the beat is ti stiff but it isnt bad though , i mean the equalizsation of it is okee isnt it cheers Scaranja, the beat itself is fine, your overall level's sounded great, what im sayin is maybe try n fill it up with snippit's of break's, layer them in with what you have and then when your satisfied, lower that main beat and blend it all together, you might fully want your sound the way it is, just some me ideas, hope this was helpfull, cheers Scaranja. __ Space 18-05-2007 03:36 tryptech Tryptech Registration Date: 16-08-2006 Posts: 853 Helpfulness rating:  Thanks your comments are very appreciated __ ANALOGUE (Tryptech) 18-05-2007 10:15 CULTURE BOY v v v iv a record missing Registration Date: 12-01-2007 Posts: 1,415 Helpfulness rating:  the high hat needs to be a lot louder in the intro (imo) intro sounding nice man! beats simple but cool man. nice liquid vibe going on in there, maybe a bit too much lfo used in some parts. pretty nice track tho! __ www.myspace.com/cultureboydnb soundcloud 21-05-2007 23:57 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » Scaranja - Woods