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demolitionkid 
where's demo?
Registration Date: 08-11-2006
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Please check out my new track 'invasion' and post your comments here!!!
ok guys i think im gettin closer to how i want it to sound.i still have breaks to add and edit.a few synths and im tryin to get philbee to add some flavor on the remix of this track.the next post will be my fin version.thnx again hp for 1 of the breaks so far.....
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04-05-2007 20:45 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Nice track! Drums are well done, good atmoshpere (padz!). Vocals are good.
The repeating "invasion" works well.
Try not to repeat the whole vocal stuff in exactly the same way. It will get boring. Maybe put some filters onto it the second time, add some automation to it. Cut up the words and reorder them. They don't have to be understandable to add to the track.
The bass is somewhat strange, I don't know if it is a bassdrum or a bass sound (?) atleast a reall bass sound is missing imo. The sound somewhat reminds me of some samba drummers 
A real bass sound could also add to the buildup which is not present enough right now.
For a preview this is really great, now go fix it 
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04-05-2007 23:10 |
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Paracyte
Crazy Bouncin Sinusoid
Registration Date: 07-12-2006
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so far so good !
nice ddark atmo,good break ,a bit too much repetition on vocals ,but it can be only my opinion.Im listening on poo poo speakers so cant really say a word about quality.
Big up.
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05-05-2007 01:17 |
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demolitionkid
where's demo?
Registration Date: 08-11-2006
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it needs a lot of work still.i doubled the beginning part to make it longer because i plan to edit the hell out of it.same with the vocal part.im going to try to glitch it as well.i need mixdown the bass dif.its not poppin right.i had just got to a point of where i wanted some feedback. thanks guys 
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05-05-2007 16:47 |
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cynik
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Registration Date: 15-03-2005
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too much sub in the kick imo, strange drumming, is that kick hitting twice per kick?
great buildup at 2:50 but you drop it a bit sudden, could have builded an dbuilded and then a huge drop
a good start, keep on it
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05-05-2007 17:44 |
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terraon
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Registration Date: 07-08-2006
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Nice track. Star wars vox woot 
I liked the begining with the pads and stuff, but i didn't really like the subkick, it was hitting abit too hard for my ears. The drums are otherwise really good and nice mixed. The song is kind of simple all the way through, could need some diffrence between the start and the ending.
I did like the pads and the vox effects. You really got that "buh!" fit with the drums. The build up was nice with the amen drum in it.
Where's the bass? 
Anyhow, the track was actually good, keep it dnb 
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05-05-2007 22:05 |
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equipped
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Registration Date: 20-05-2005
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Big cheers Demolitionkid, forshure diggin the hard sound, didn't like beat at all when it start's but when you get the shit goin your edit's are beuty, load's of funk goin down, maybe work the start of it, just me opinion, this forshure a heafty track, cheers.
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07-05-2007 07:28 |
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wildfyre
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Registration Date: 20-04-2007
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i think that the bass doesn't really build up to enough, u kinda expect a bit more if u know wat i mean.
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19-05-2007 11:50 |
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