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rodi
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Registration Date: 25-03-2007
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Please check out my new track 'Brain Tickler' and post your comments here!!!
Hi again everybody.
A new one from me , basicly the name says it everything , just a sound that makes ur brain tickle in a liquid funk way 
feedback is always welcome
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02-05-2007 20:07 |
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BattleDrone 
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Yo, sweet track. Some little problems though.
The flute sample in the intro has some crackled things going on (bad when listening on headphone).
The flute melody is clearly a complete sample, it actually needs more variation. Especially because it is played throughout the whole of the track. Maybe you should chop the sample and play new melodies with it or use a one note sample (or VST instrument) and do your own melodies? Just a tought.
The first part of the intro needs stuffing, it sounds too empty and the rhytmic elements give the impression that this is a real slow track. Add some pads or something.
That vocal thingy is just sweet.
Those horns at 1:20" sound a bit off tone.
At 2:42" you do something weird with the panning, not cool, please remove (especially on headphones) or make it sound less accidental. Panning can be a cool thing if kept within limits and not too fast.
At 3:01 you introduce a new instrument which doesn't fit into the feel of the track imo. Try some other instrument maybe.
The track needs more elements imo, for such a long track it's really hard to keep things interesting with just a handfull of elements. You should add some drops (let the rythmic stuff stop) and then build up again.
You sure prove that you know how to do it, now push your limits further and pick up some extra tricks along the way to make the track top notch.
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02-05-2007 23:30 |
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rodi
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Before this comment , i wrote a whole text on commenting ur feedback , but now i've desided just to thank u , thx for the listen ...
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03-05-2007 14:25 |
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Dozik
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Registration Date: 26-04-2007
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nice one ! 
I guess the name says it all indeed!
nice mastering overal!
tha beats are simple but rolling wich is a good thing actualy!
the ambiental funky jazz flute and synth fit in nicely !
but the bass isn't present enough ,
i dont know if it comes frome my headphones or what but
i think you might have a Panning problem with the synth!
i like the vacation vibe in it ,i could close my eyes and see myself i a beach !
Good work
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04-05-2007 13:54 |
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rodi
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By panning problems u mean that reversed little thingie ?
thx for the comment dude
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04-05-2007 17:41 |
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Seven Gun
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Registration Date: 16-01-2007
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yo rodi!
nice tune man.
beats are nice n rolly with good vibes.
tune is too long tho imo, shorten by a minute.
all your melodies and samples work really nice.
dodgy event at 2.43, sounds awful that little bit. can only think it was accidental, because the rest of the sound is tight.
also, turn your sub-bass up a notch or two, sounding a tiny bit week on that front.
all in all, nice track
big up
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07-05-2007 18:57 |
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rodi
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Hmm i thought this effect would sound nice ( i mean that on 2:43 ), i guess it turned out bad 
Anyways thx for the listen
cheers
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07-05-2007 19:53 |
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Lightningflash
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Registration Date: 25-07-2005
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nice to drive to this one
good sound balance.
kik sounds like a tom
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08-05-2007 00:24 |
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