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Seven Gun 
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Please check out my new track 'Terrible Jibberish' and post your comments here!!!
one days work track.
i quite like it so i'm gonna probs leave it as is.
give me some feedback if ya can be be bothered,
if not, hope ya enjoy!
first dnb track i made for a couple of weeks.
been making some dub-step.
big up .be boys n gals!!!!!!!
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01-05-2007 02:45 |
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D Juice
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Well i'm lookin at something that has got two sides, just like a medaillon:
1: The mastering, eq, frequency and such things are REALLy nicely done. everything just fits and has its own place in the track
2: i dont like this genre of dnb that much, i'd advise you to get 2 snares in a [whats it called? a "maat" in dutch, lol]
if you'd do that, the beat will be more rolling. by the way , what software are you using? if you use ableton, maybe i can try to remix some shizzle in the way i like it, cause i like the sounds, only not the beat.
Well, hopefully this is usefull for ya,
Luuk [D Juice]
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01-05-2007 11:35 |
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GeeZZ
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wicked on the track
love the sound production is fat eq fx everythin is spot on the vocal samples used really well
wot eles is there to say after a while i the beat gets a bit old but thats more my taste i d say maybe switch it up after a while jus to keep rollin
but still theese beats always sound great in the middle of a rollin set
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01-05-2007 12:23 |
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BattleDrone
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Originally posted by D Juice
Well i'm lookin at something that has got two sides, just like a medaillon:
1: The mastering, eq, frequency and such things are REALLy nicely done. everything just fits and has its own place in the track
2: i dont like this genre of dnb that much, i'd advise you to get 2 snares in a [whats it called? a "maat" in dutch, lol]
if you'd do that, the beat will be more rolling. by the way , what software are you using? if you use ableton, maybe i can try to remix some shizzle in the way i like it, cause i like the sounds, only not the beat.
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Totally agree with 1. here...
2. In my opinion this is half step all the way. The rythm doesn´t have that full banging speed any regular DnB track has. Not to fond of this style either, like the more conventional rythm/speed. I do wonder what the track would sound like with such a rythm.
The intro doesn't build up very much, no tension is created (which is ok for a rather layed back track though).
The vocal is not my kind of stuff either. But the track sure ain´t bad.
@ DJuice: (maat) you can call it a "bar" in English.
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01-05-2007 14:35 |
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CULTURE BOY
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01-05-2007 19:02 |
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philbee
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love it,love it,really likin the old skool synth yah usin man,phat as fuck,i can see where yah goin with tha beatz man an there smooth,bass is killer,nice vocal stabs,all in all sweet,i'll aim yah soon man,gotta av a copy of this to play out,big tune(imo)peace
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01-05-2007 20:20 |
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Seven Gun
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nice one philster.
its yours man, just hit me up on aim for the mp3
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02-05-2007 00:16 |
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stickbubbly
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solid track man.
lovin the fat drums and the dirty bass line.
great mix down
i look forward to hearin more.
cheers
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04-05-2007 04:42 |
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H.ill
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That's a nice one dude, so as said before, you've got good quality of mastering and choice of sounds.
I would have apprecieted a little more banging drumline, but it fits IMO well your old school bass line.
Waiting for more...
Cheers, dude.
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05-05-2007 01:47 |
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Seven Gun
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nice one folks. 
just a quick thing this tune. would like to put an original ragga mc
vocal on it. build needs more time too.
maybe i will go back to it someday?
cheers all 
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06-05-2007 03:14 |
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Paracyte
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Put some vocal right now,thats what is missing in that tune mate.
cheers.
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06-05-2007 08:32 |
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equipped
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Big fucking tune, thick n fresh, finally something new, forshure diggn it SEVEN GUN, heafty heafty, big cheers.
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07-05-2007 07:40 |
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07-05-2007 07:45 |
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Seven Gun
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i'm gonna big up this track myself, as its getting good noises
from a lot of dj's who want this for their sets!!!
BOH!!!
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