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rampaige.ronny
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Registration Date: 25-02-2007
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Please check out my new track 'track 01' and post your comments here!!!
my first drumnbass track. don´t have much experience. hope you guys will help me to right my wrongs.
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28-04-2007 19:48 |
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CULTURE BOY 
v v v iv a record missing
Registration Date: 12-01-2007
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28-04-2007 19:59 |
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rodi
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Registration Date: 25-03-2007
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make the bongos in the intro bit louder its almost mute 
The kick is wrong imo
No proper drop , and that synthline is totaly out of the main idea
atleast it doesn't suit the intro
a good start i guess , keep them rollin'
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29-04-2007 09:31 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
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The drums sound to "regular", pitch tem up a bit and make them more punchy. You might want to layer a break underneath to get it rolling. The choice of sounds is rather poor. Look around for some good basic samplepacks to get better sounds.
The melodic stuff sounds undefined (blurry). There is need for a real bass sound.
So in fact there´s a lot to do, but that´s perfectly normal. Keep working on the sound, post a track every now and then and we´ll gladly give you feedback and watch you grow as a producer.
My first tracks were awfull, but it was fun to make them anyway
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29-04-2007 13:42 |
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kcack
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Registration Date: 29-04-2007
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Alrite tune for ur first go. Like the sounds you've used like the electronic ones however not too sure if you have the rite drum tunes for them. In my opinion the drums and the lead tunes do not go, however othas may disagree. The start sounds good, gets your mood up and gives you that drum n bass feeling, however, I think the drum beat sounds a bit off and I think there is a big difference in theme from when you start the track to the end. Guitar sound at end fits well with tune and an alright ending.Overall a pretty good first track. Still lot to improve on but keep it up!!! Perfection only comes with practice and experience.
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17-06-2007 14:27 |
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