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just a lil preview for yall
but i think you oughta check it
http://users.pandora.be/soddom/Soddom%20-%20Splinter.mp3
still a lot of work to do, especially mixin n mastering wise, but only started yesterday so there's much more to come
tell me what you feeel
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30-11-2003 16:20 |
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stino
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the idea is there, but it needs a lot of work dude
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30-11-2003 20:08 |
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-J-
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that's why it's called a preview and why i said i only started yesterday and also why i said there's still a lot of work to do
did you actually listen btw ?
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30-11-2003 20:40 |
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stino
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hey
good vocals again . well structured , good bassline buildup but still:
i don't like the drumsound in general... except for the amen bits
the synthline is hc ( like théo said ) ... don't really like that... maybe you should add another synthline more deeper , more tight to the bass , not so high
and yeah i did listen
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30-11-2003 21:01 |
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-J-
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there is a mid-range synth too 
(it even drops down to the bass every note)
about the hardcore sample, well yea, i absolutely adore that sample !
the amen is temporarily cause i like it the least in this tune myself ..., the other break is a heavily edited firestarter break (you know, the prodigy break)
and then an seperate machine for the hats & conga's
and yea 
the vocal
hardcore ownz 
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30-11-2003 21:30 |
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D-Lux
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You are on badd ass mother fucker 
This tune rocks...
I like amens, but get red off it... Doesn´t fit this song... Make it into a hardcore gabber/hardcore break
Build up is great, but the drop lacks lots off power 
Would love to help out on this one...
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01-12-2003 10:10 |
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stino
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i mean after that 4measures add another sounding synth more deeper
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01-12-2003 14:49 |
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-J-
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i know what you mean, and it's there
just use your ears mate, god gave you ears so use em (and don't come whining it wears out the batteries
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01-12-2003 14:53 |
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-J-
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what, and loose that sample ?
you're crazy
i adore that sample
btw: mp3 is updated, same link
it's now it's final length, still lots of work to do, but this is the preview
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01-12-2003 15:39 |
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Surya
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Intro is cool.
Like that Trancecore choirsound too (used it in the past for some very bad trancecore tracks
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Not too fond of the vocals tho.
The melody is a bit weird: starts out very good, but more to the end it's a bit dull imo, so that could be better.
A decent bassline or sub couldn't hurt imo and the drums need more punch, but I guess you'll fix that...
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01-12-2003 18:22 |
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stino
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Originally posted by -J-
what, and loose that sample ?
you're crazy
i adore that sample
btw: mp3 is updated, same link
it's now it's final length, still lots of work to do, but this is the preview |
you did what i meant with the synthline !!
I'll have to learn to express myself better I guess.
sounds better, but still, your drumsound, especially hihats ... 
don't like it
"tiz vuil" but still
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01-12-2003 19:01 |
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thechronic
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Different style than what I'm used to, but I like it
The drums sound too distant, get rid of the reverb!
Drum programming is good, very energetic and interesting. The vocals sit well in the track.
At 3:10 the hardcore stab fits in perfectly with the rest, surprised me a bit, I was wondering how you were going to reintroduce it again.
The bass sound needs some more work, it sounds like a plucked string bass, but I think a more synthesised sound with more sustain would be better for this track.
There are some sounds in the background (like the 'tsjoep tsjoep' sound) that only come to attention when several instruments drop away, you need to mix that in a little better perhaps.
Good tune!! Let's hear the next version!
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