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BattleDrone 
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Not bad at all, you put a lot of work into this. All the different sounds, vocals, and the little patterns fit together very well. Good atmospere going on
I hear a good intro, a drop building up to a climax and then Woosh it falls down to a level which I can only describe as "relaxed" compared to the intro. so either you build up too much tension or you can't maintain the tension in the rest of the track.
See where you want to take the track and adjust as needed IMO.
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23-04-2007 13:15 |
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Rudeone
love & light
Registration Date: 15-10-2005
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nice intro, cool atmosfear, druming and edits. mainpart needs more low end, more pressure. try to get the mix right and its gonna be a very nice tune
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23-04-2007 15:08 |
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thechronic
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Registration Date: 01-11-2002
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Quick review:
The hats and cymbals in the first part are too loud, is really harsh at that point, from the middle on it is ok.
I really like the tempo, it is a hell of a driving track, this would get my butt moving at a party 
Some mix problems:
- the wide synth bass which comes in at 2:15 is too loud. it's also too wide and overpowering. EQ it a bit to fit it in.
- the sine sub is a bit too loud at times, i hear it very clearly on my little tannoys 
- piano melody is also too upfront, it would sound great if it were a bit thinner and more in the background
There is a lot of stuff going on, this track never bores, some melodies are great, but some could perhaps better be left out, eg i'm not too fond of the part between 3:08 and 3:17.
I like the old skool switching drums a lot, the main melody is also really nice, and the fx give it a haunting atmosphere.
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23-04-2007 15:23 |
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cynik
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Registration Date: 15-03-2005
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omg wtf is with that high pithced sound in the intro. hurts the ears
ah it seems some sort of high pithced resonance is present all the time roughly at 14khz. what is that man 
the track seems alright. cant listen to it properly tho
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24-04-2007 19:17 |
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Dozik
Newbie
Registration Date: 26-04-2007
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my 1rst impression is on the overal sound is that the sound quality of the percs sounds a little bit bad ,maybe cuz it's a sliced loop!
Shold work the sound quality there!
the bass game is prety good though nice precise automation!
the jungle loops shold have some work on the quality too!
Overal it has prety good pontential!
but gota work on ya overal sound quality!
nice work tough on the creative side!
Cheers
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30-04-2007 11:26 |
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Halph-Price
Zombie Algorithm
Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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omfg you used the default sound of the vanguard, lol XD that's probably the overpowered synth at 2:30. don't use presets so straight like tht, and specially the default one. makes you lose cred.
didn't have enough time to write a review now, but that's just funny.
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