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wrm
orchestral/idm/deep/liquid/experi/mental
Registration Date: 13-09-2006
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Please check out my new track 'summer's comming' and post your comments here!!!
hey, check out my new track, the weather is fine last few days so I made this track cos I like it
replies apreciated....
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22-04-2007 22:05 |
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Seven Gun 
dotbee 4eva
Registration Date: 16-01-2007
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nice choice of samples here.
intro is ok but the main bass synth is bit too loud and the resolution sounds a bit too high.
beats are ok.
the main chunk of the tune......
i think the bass notes and melodies dont fit together too well.
i love the meadowy pad/synth u have used.
not bad tune that. 
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23-04-2007 16:26 |
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Rudeone
love & light
Registration Date: 15-10-2005
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i really love the sounds you're using. somehow the leadmelodie doesnt sound too good with the other elements coming in. such a shame as the sounds used and the single melodies itsself sound very beautiful. drop sounds very mashed up. needs more bass. try to get rid of unwanted frequencies.
just how i feel the composition of course
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23-04-2007 16:47 |
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strato
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Registration Date: 10-04-2007
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this the second tune of yours i hear and i'm already your fan. sorry i can't criticize i like it as it is
maybe only more bass... always more bass ;]
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26-04-2007 14:51 |
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Halph-Price
Zombie Algorithm
Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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the intro is a bit offf, maybe filter sweep it in, it reminds me of my early fl songs. maybe not start with the pads right away... the rest sounds very good . just that intro sounds very digital and noob...
the mix is good, i don't thinkthe bass is too loud. later on it's just loud enough. but you should high pass the pads and everything else to help let the deep sub be clean and rocking. the effects or soemthing is adding some noise.
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26-04-2007 16:08 |
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wrm
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cheers guys, I really apreciate your reviews!!! ANd Strato, you´re my fan number 1!!!! lol, cheers
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26-04-2007 17:01 |
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tetsuo
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Registration Date: 26-12-2004
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Need a bit more mastering and eq. nice sound, maybe more bass or lead would be a good idea.
Intro is not as said before, and the melody might need effect/changes over the time. I like the vocal.
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